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@acancello

Yes! You got it! *squeaks in pure joy*

The rivers represent stable-minded people.

I’m glad you like it, and I will definitely tag you! 😆

@grcr

I really like your poem! So the way I see it is basically the last two lines you wrote,

“Even if our country goes insane,

The clearest rivers will still remain.”

So kind of like even if our country goes insane, the clearest rivers (people?) still remain?

If I totally did not understand it, dont worry I do not know if I am the best at…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Gotcha. 🙃

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you! 😊

Is everyone’s pfp back or is it just me? If so, yay!😁

@kydonandwillow

Ooo… this is getting interesting….

I don’t know why, but Kydon’s thoughts in the last sentence had me laughing.

I don’t have too much to say, but maybe you could combine some of the sentences so that is runs smoother. Like, instead of saying:

• Caleb dropped a box suddenly and it broke open. Bows, arrows, swords, and…

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@kydonandwillow

Awesome! 😄

Ooo.. I’m excited to find out what it is… 😏

@esther-c

Same!🤣

@kydonandwillow

It sounds good still! 😀 There are some things that I noticed, though…

I know in the first chapter you mentioned the brick walkway, but you may want to add even more description the twin’s house so the picture is painted better. As the reader, I’m wondering if its large or small? What color are the walls and what kind of…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Yay! (sorry this is late… heh heh)

Reading it now… 😁

@godlyfantasy12 @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings

I dont have Instagram either, so also let me know when you are going to make the doc!

Its totally confusing me, having no pfps 🤣

@godlyfantasy12

I was actually thinking the same thing today 🙂 We definitely should make a Google doc! I would be ok to share my email with you all 😀

@kydonandwillow

Ok, I see. 😄

@kydonandwillow

Hi there!

I like it so far. I love the how you wrote it. I thought the part where he put the nightgown in the oven was funny…😄

I’m not fully qualified for editing, but I did have one question….

Is Kydon on his way to give the muffins in the first paragraph of the book? I was a bit confused… at first I thought he was…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my! I am sorry you are going through all that, but of course I will pray!🤗 💗 I hope everything smooths out and you get everything situated! (Also you can ask us to pray as many times as you need😊) If you need to talk about anything else just let me know💗

@keilah-h

Oh. 😊

…mmm… thats very interesting.

@keilah-h

Oh, I see. …heh heh…

Which do you like better, dinosaurs or dragons?

@keilah-h

😊 …heh heh…

You’re welcome! 🙃 Do you like Jurassic World?

@keilah-h

Hi there!

Thanks! lol 😄

Cool character, too, by the way!