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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I did mention a possible explanation for why the prisoners might call it that, although I’m not sure it would account for why the Pythonos do.
There are other “units”, this is just the main one and the most important one.
Okay though, that would be hilarious if that actually happened, if Marcurious asked Jraldath why it’s called the UN…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I know it’s a little rough, but it’s my first draft so definitely far from perfect, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Here’s a little snippet from the next chapter from Liv’s POV:
Chapter 17
“I’ll race you to the brook,” Jyran smiled crookedly over his shoulder, barely giving Livia a chance to agree before giving his mount Irwin a gentle squeeze with his calves and galloping away in a cloud of dirt.
Liv tucked a strand of her azure hair behind her ear,…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, I’ll work on the idea about the horses.
EXU…I kind of like that. We’ll see though. Imagine if I did do EU…and someone from Europe read that, they’d be like “Europe’s not like that at all!” jk.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I might just keep it the UNIT, then.
You keep asking, though, why it is the “unit” and how is it the definition of the word. I tend to be lazy and not overthink it. Correct me if I’m wrong but does it really matter why it’s called that? If so, why does it matter? (sorry if I sound like a brat rn, I’m just kind of confused.) It is just a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry. Brain fart. I meant EU. (Why did I put P?) But then that reminds me of the abbreviation for Europe. So idk.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
So in my WIP, Liv has a horse named Xandro. I was thinking that all the races have horses that are intelligent and match the “color scheme” and have the same powers. For example: Liv in an Aquino, she has blue hair, eyes, skin, clothes, and has the power to manipulate water. Xandro has a blue coat, eyes, hooves, mane and…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, ofc!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
In that case, maybe the prison could be split into several units and you could call this one the ‘Experimental Unit’
Okay, I like that. Maybe I could call it the EP instead of the UNIT for short? (I know, so creative…not.)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I love conviction! And oh my gosh, Flaz would drive Ellis insane, this is going to be hilarious!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
little huh?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
lol 😂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
(you’re welcome!! 😄)
Yeah, I was thinking it might be cool if they had to journey a bit before they got there. The house could tell them how to get there.
Mmm, good idea. *thinks of all the annoying things Flaz might say while on the journey*
My character isn’t at the house though, so everyone else can do whatever they want. Maybe my c…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Alrighty! He sounds pretty cool!! 😄 (And so does Conviction)
So where is the house now? I know it transported them across worlds, but where, geographically, is it? I would assume it is somewhere near a city, since they were transported there to help the queen?
Hmm… near a city would make sense… or even possibly near her castle (or…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I don’t really know… lol… I don’t think anything is known so we’ll probably have to make it up as we go…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Aww thanks 😊 He’s one of my favorite characters
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I love Flaz! His personality is just…awesome!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
😅 So… They’ve already done the dance… (I don’t know if they are going to continue any bit more…)
The Queen of Lillen (I think??) has told them that they have been transferred to the new universe/country/world… but she hasn’t said much else. The house has moved everyone already, and they are still trying to figure out…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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