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Elfwing replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
@devastate-lasting lol thanks!
@nova21 Hahahahaha cinnamon rolls! That’s great! XD
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
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Elfwing replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
you’re welcome!! 🙂
I totally understand what you mean; I do that so often, which is why it’s lovely to have several very different people in my book so one can ramble, one play devil’s advocate, and the other one, who’s the quiet rough one, can end any stupidity happening in the disagreement. XD
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Elfwing replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
haha, thanks! I guess she’s based on yours truly *bows, then hesitates, evaluates character, and wonders if I actually paid myself a compliment or not… *
First of all… I LOVE the name Keaton! second, his dialogue seems to fit. I suppose just keep his lines short, don’t have him using too many please n’ thank you’s and keep…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
Hahaha! I already love Felicity! 😉
He totally sounds like you described him. If I had to go on an adventure now, I’d want him to be the leader! 😉
Can I hang out with Catherine for a day, please? Just a day? XD
Hahaha! Poor Horace. *cough* dumb teenagers *cough* 🙂
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Elfwing replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 9 months ago
You’re welcome! 🙂 the story sounds so intriguing, and I’m sure it’ll be epic, whatever you decide!
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ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting 4 years, 9 months ago
Hey Kayleigh!! Of course! That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂
Hey Elfwing! Thanks!! Oh I totally get that!! That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!
Hey Daisy! Aw, thanks!! That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Been there. A lot.
I agree with all these fine folks!
I will break up my advice:
1: I’d say don’t try too hard on things. If you’re finding it hard, write what you can, and don’t push so hard you’re on the edge of tears (personal admonishment for myself right now XD), but as Elizabeth said, refill!!! I love writing, but at…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Greetings, Fellow Writers!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
Thank you! it took me a year and a half to decide! lol
Well, I must say my inspiration was partly from a Griffin clan keychain pendant I was given two years ago. One side of my family two generations back has that last name. 🙂 That triggered the story being started as well as the story of the MC (main character), but the actual world…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
sorry, your tag didn’t go through the first time
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Elfwing replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
haha!! Great idea!! And I’d say your MCs dialogue fits.
My sci fi book MC is shy in big groups but stubborn and has her opinions and likes to bug her brother
her first three lines in the story:
(Omits action) Alden, stop it! I hit in here five minutes ago!”
(Omits action) “Good morning. I didn’t burn the house down so that’s encouragi…
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
@nova21 Oo cool idea!! Yours are funny XD
My character is kinda bubbly and sarcastic/teasing, so Ladies, here’s Catherine XD:
“It’s the perfect gift for your girlfriend, don’t ya think?”
“How many children will I be the aunt of? Six? Seven?”
“Oh! What if you have all girls! Your home will be amazing. Make sure you invite me over a lot.”
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Aww sorry you’re burned out!!
So personally, I have a few hobbies that I like to keep up with. If I burn out on one, I focus on bettering another until I feel ready to work on the first one again. Just make sure you do something so your creative inkwell doesn’t run dry, catch my quill?
Sometimes if I burn out, I listen to…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Greetings, Fellow Writers!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
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Elfwing replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art 4 years, 9 months ago
i see! you still did well 🙂
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ella started the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters 4 years, 9 months ago
The title says it all, folks. I just thought it might be fun to compare what your character says to see if the dialogue truly matches their personality or not.
So I’ll share mine first!
MC is Dylan, who is stubborn, quiet, and strong-willed. A little self-protective. Lmk if his dialogue fits his personality.
1) “Better.” (*rolls eyes…
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ella replied to the topic Overcoming Writer's Burnout : in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
This is ALL too relatable, Lexi! The way I usually (try) to overcome writer’s block/burnout is picking up a different project. I have *counts Scrivener docs* 25 WIPs from the last 2 yrs. Not that they’re perfect. (Or finished.)
This way really helps me to take a step back and pick a project that I’ve been developing pre…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic What's the weirdest story you've ever written? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’ve never seen the movie but my whole family loooves the old cartoons!
@devastate-lasting Looll XD I mean some of the most interesting stories were born from chaos tho XD
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Elfwing replied to the topic Greetings, Fellow Writers!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
ahhh yes they totally ruined the Hobbit movies. Although I think they did a good job of Smaug
LoTR is my favourite book to read and I’ve listened through it several times too! Cool that you listen through it too! I have the unabridged audiobook copy narrated by Rob Inglis. I can fall asleep listening to that book now lol
i am cu…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Greetings, Fellow Writers!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
Hi!! Welcome!
Sounds like you are writing some really intriguing stories! 🙂
Have you read/watched the Hobbit/Lord of the Rings?
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