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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Awww thank you!!! I’m so happy to hear that!!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
@writerlexi1216 ahhh thank youuu!!! I really appreciate it!!!!
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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Here’s one for the POVs (who are sisters), Aven and Emiyn:

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Daisy Torres replied to the topic First Chapter (Fantasy) Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Awww I’m so glad that you’re trying your hand at writing!!! Thanks for the tag on your new chapter! I’ll read that one asap! (I’m starting this one first XD)
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
ABSOLUTELY!!!! And YAY I can’t wait!!!!
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Daisy Torres started the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Starlight twinkles everywhere in shades of vibrancy that I haven’t seen in months. My feet danced in the stardust scattered on the moon like crushed diamonds.</p>
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A mere ghost of a child lay very still on a hospital bed. Her skin…[Read more] -
Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@joy-caroline absolutely!!!
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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @e-k-seaver, @daisy-torres, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @writerlexi1216, @jenwriter17, @godlyfantasy12, @hallie-jean, @ribbonash, @wyn-rose
Hey everyone!! I just want to thank you all for your tips/input/reading/offering-to-read/etc. and I want you to know how much I appreciate…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms Agreeeeddd :/
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@joy-caroline AAWW that is SOO sweet!!! I love it!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms HAHA I feel that haiku on such a deep level XDDD Beautiful.
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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
for those of you who read my chapter, I changed Midhael’s name to Malia, because the original one was amazing in my twelve-year old head, but really hard to pronounce, lol!!
So this one is Malia’s:

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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Beautiful collages everyone!!!!!!!!!!
Here’s one for Aven’s BFF, Grove:

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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@joy-caroline Exactlyy XD It was completely unexpected lol.
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Yuupp!! Also, anytime you’re ready for the link, just let me know! Part three is still a wip, but the other two are ready to go!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@joy-caroline Hahaa normally I’d say same because it’s super hot here and NEVER snows, but this was horrible. People froze to death because we were forced to have our power grid shut off during the coldest days. No one was ready for it at all. 10/10 w0uld not recommend 😬 Most people don’t even have running water yet (myself included 🙃). This was a…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Ohh thank you!! You’ll actually be reading/beta-ing it XD
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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
And her step-sister, Aven:

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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Here’s the collage for my MC, Emiyn:

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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Hey Wyn!! Ooo, I’m so glad that you like Emiyn!!! Yes, I agree about the transition. I didn’t really notice that, haha (that’s what y’all are for, right? 😜). Also, I’m really glad you like the tone! Yep, it’s my old friend show-don’t-tell again… we have a long history, lol! And I totally get that about flashbacks instead of exp…[Read more]
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