@markmcguire
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I Need a Title in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien hm… ‘Out of the Mouths of Children’? Okay, that may be a little long and a little obvious… 😛
I really like @Daeus‘s ‘I’ll Fly Away’.
Aaaaaand I’m drawing a blank. I’ll let you know if I think of anything else though.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien no, I haven’t. And please don’t remind me of Kili… *groans* I like him much better in the book. 😛
SO, I offer you sympathy. *offers sympathy on a silver platter* But I really can’t relate. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Leviathan in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@R-E-P sure, no problem. I work best with examples too. 😉
So take this first paragraph: The wind whistled through the crenelations on the castle wall. To Carl, it was a common place sound and he was not consciously aware of it. Regardless, it made a fitting backdrop for his boyish imagination as he planned a strategic mission against the wily…[Read more] -
Hope Ann replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy I love Little Dorrit, and most of the other Dickens movie/mini series out there.
@sarah-h I’v heard of I am not Ashamed and it looks really good though I’ve not seen it yet.
I really want to see Priceless too.
And The Great Escape and The Imitation Game are really good. I didn’t care for Unbroken as much, but that was because…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 8 months ago
@Sarah-H it’s a Dickens— about the youngest daughter of a debtor’s family who has to work to help her father pay his way out of debtor’s prison. Love story, but so much more— it’s about family, and sincerity, and courage and determination and self-sacrifice— it’s one of my all time favorites. Definitely recommend it.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 8 months ago
@mark-kamibaya The Inkheart books are even better. The first one seemed a little slow because the movie quickened everything so much, but I still liked it and I loved the next two. Inkdeath was my favorite.
Yes I’ve seen the Robert Downey Jr. Sherlock Holmes movies. They are pretty good. I’ve seen the Martian too. A few objectionable parts, but…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Leviathan in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@R-E-P ah yes, thank you. I’m not sure what was going on with the first one; it’s working now. *headscratch* Oh well.
I did enjoy this story— loved the humor, and I also really love the way you incorporated the Leviathan passage. That’s one of my favorite passages, btw. 😉
The biggest problem I noticed was quite a bit of telling, versus…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Hang Out with KP Staff Next Friday! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
I wish I could be there, but I’m going to be gone… 🙁
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 9 years, 8 months ago
Yay @Bluejay! That’s awesome!
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 9 years, 8 months ago
Congratulations @bluejay! That is splendtastic!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help Me, Help You, Help…er…The World? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Michael-Stanton I haven’t, but that’s just because I’m a technological dinosaur and don’t have an account on any of those social media sites myself. 😛 I’m going to be getting Facebook at least, as I understand it’s crucial to marketing, but right now I’m still happily hermiting with just this forum and my mom’s email. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus that’s wonderful.
Well… the only input I could offer is, just explain how books are supposed to mirror reality because reality is truth, and in the long run ‘… the truth shall make you free.’ That probably goes without saying, so I don’t know how helpful that’ll be, but I hope it is, anyhow.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hang Out with KP Staff Next Friday! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Oh dear oh dear oh dear, I’m going to be gone next Friday. *sniff* 😛
But you guys have fun for me, ‘kay? 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Help Me, Help You, Help…er…The World? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Thanks @Aratrea. 🙂 That’s great.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Leviathan in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@R-E-P for some reason the link does not seem to be working now…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
I’m praying, @Daeus. I think I can safely say it’s not your writing which at fault. The scene is necessary as an inciting incident and it is tragic, but it isn’t gruesome. If everything written was sunshiny, then there’d not be much to write about…though I suppose hearing a murder in the first chapter could be startling if one wasn’t expecting…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus yes. Once you get through this (and you will, make no mistake) your relationship will be much stronger and built on better understanding.
Still praying.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus yes. I’m praying.
I think the thing with bits like that is that it can come as a real shock to people who haven’t thought through the necessity of darkness in literature. They may not disagree once they think through it, but (especially for moms) the shock of hearing it without preparation can throw them into turmoil pretty harshly.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 8 months ago
@Sarah-H yes, I loved that one! So heartwrenching… which probably explains why I loved it. 😛
Let’s see… I also really like Master and Commander, Horatio Hornblower, Little Dorrit, and Pirates of the Caribbean 1. I like the other Pirates movies as well, but none so well as the first.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Before you hear it from DeGraaf… in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy Welcome to the club; people generally think Joy is older than me too. And they are always surprised when I tell them I’m 22. It’s quite fun, really. 😉
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