@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper @GracieGirl @Winter-Rose Totally agreed.
They actually had a relationship, if you know what I mean. Not just a you-look-pretty-we-work-well-together thing. It meant something.
Gabrielle, exactly.
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Snapper replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal @emma-flournoy I think that if they had kissed at the end it would’ve messed up the scene.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Sometimes, simple is better. The hug at the end was WAY more powerful than any words or kisses.
AGREED. Gushing and kissing, sheesh. That hug was so incredibly sincere it was WAY better than any gushing or kissing would’ve been.
*buys a piece of candy for Cassian when he was little*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal I’m not sure myself, but now you’ll have a glittery Elf kingdom for your domain!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@graciegirl 😉 If I don’t have anything blocking me called writer’s block, my usual is a thousand or so in an hour.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@graciegirl @winter-rose I’m done for now, having wrote 1,161 words. Thanks for writing!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose And for Aslan!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose I shall join you in this quest.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal Yes, a series. 😀 I already have three planned out, and an idea for the fourth. You’re the elf ruler.
@emma-flournoy Glitter. The Elf kingdom shall be very…glittery.
@rolena-hatfield 😀 Glad you liked it! -
Ethryndal posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
It’s the job that’s never started as takes longest to finish. —Samwise Gamgee
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper I just got to read it! Thank you for making my day! So humorous and witty! Immensely entertained! I shall gladly read the sequels. Nice job! 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy @GracieGirl Ashamed to admit it, but I just realized the only proof I had for it not being romantic was that they didn’t gush about it and they didn’t kiss.
WHAT HAS AMERICA COME TO WHEN THE ONLY WAY TO SHOW YOU’RE IN LOVE IS GUSHING AND KISSING?!?
Having watched RO again last night, I would be inclined to agree with you; it was…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A Name For Rodyn in the forum Characters 9 years, 5 months ago
@levipierpont Ooh, Rodyn Rider! That has such a nice ring to it. I was actually even thinking about making him along the lines of Flynn Rider, so it’s pretty cool that stood out to you about him. 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper YASSS! SEQUEL. The LegendS of King Daeus. Therefore, a series.
@Emma-Flournoy How did glitter even become a thing? Sometimes I puzzle myself. 😛
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@delightinlife Cinderella! (The 2015 version, I believe.) Excellent choice.
It’s just the usual; summary of out-of-pocket expenses, time required, remuneration, funeral arrangements, so forth.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I’m going to be an MC? Cool.
Yes, you should totally totally do more sequels. You can make it a collection of KP spoofs. THIS IS SO FUN.
Oh, and you’re very welcome for that prompt. If I’d only known…You should do something with @Ethryndal and her glitter everywhere, and her amazing snark. Oh and maybe her Galadriel-ness.
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
@Sierra-R Congratulations on being the superhero!!! I haven’t seen a whole lot of you on the forum, but I’ve always liked you when I have, and you ARE awesome. Yay!!!
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Thanks, Emma! I was ridiculously delighted when I saw it 🙂 Kingdom Pen has come to mean a great deal to me in the relatively brief time (less than a year) that I’ve been involved, and it was awesome to get that little shout-out.
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I daresay you’ve come to mean a great deal to KP too. Judging from the reaction your articles always bring, for one thing. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@PerfectFifths At your service. 🙂 *bows*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@graciegirl Alrighty! Thanks for writing!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@graciegirl By the way, you are a mayor of a town.
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