@mark-kamibaya
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@northener @graciegirl I’ve read a bit of the backstory, and I love the fact that Pippin and Diamond had a boy named Faramir, and he married Sam and Rosie’s girl, Goldilocks. Someday I’ll get round to reading it through. And the Silmarillion, but that is far and away currently.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
And *takes deep breath* Here’s the short story.
I’m crazy.
I know that.
My mother shakes her head sadly as she closes the door. The dull click of the lock echoes in my head.
They say it’s for my own good. They say that I’m mad, a lunatic, a delusional fantasist. Locking me in here is supposed to protect me.
But I know the truth…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Thank you very much @graciegirl. You guys are all wonderful on here, and the enthusiasm means a lot to me. I’ve been a little discourage about my writing lately, because it didn’t seem to be coming from the heart, and then this… this is how I need to write. I mean, in all the flash fiction and short stories I do, the ones that I feel are really…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal… ANOTHER BESTEST PICTURE EVER!
Seriously, you should do pictures of everyone who uses a picture of them as their avatar. -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien That’s awesome! 😀 I’ll pray that your aunt’s pregnancy goes well (as well as all the others). Hope the root canal isn’t terribly nerve-wracking!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 11: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal No problem; continue working through it at your own pace. 🙂 How would you say scene one ties into your story’s theme, apart from setting up the other two scenes?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper That was great! I think adding that new paragraph at the beginning was a good idea, because a few people mentioned they were confused at the beginning. Great job! I didn’t notice anything that might need editing 🙂
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Oops. Tags. Right.
@hope @emma-flournoy @ethryndal @bethanysinkyroses @daeus @dragon-snapper @aratrea -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hey guys!
So, a prayer request, but a HUGE EXCITEMENT! (I can’t believe I haven’t mentioned this before now)
My mom is expecting my sixth sibling, Gladys Joy, in September!!!!!!!!!!
And my Aunt Darcy is also expecting in September.
And a bit more special, my mom’s sister, Aunt Julie, is expecting in January. But, they’ve had some complications…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@hope Random Answer: Do I have any experience? Well, when the advertisement says WANTED: Heroes Who Will Die For Freedom, I think the answer would be obvious.
@ethryndal @hope @adry_grace Thank you. I wrote it in past tense first, and then accidentally wrote the last paragraph present tense. Then decided I loved it that way better and changed it all.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
ROGUE ONE!!!!!
I actually just watched it again on Friday. I saw it for the first time in the movie theaters and I wanted to go and hide for the rest of the day when I was done. Coming out of the theater my face was red, my hair was a mess because I’d been pulling it and my eyes were sore from crying. (I am a VERY emotional person; I cry at any…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose I’m done for now. I made some edits to my short story.
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi guys! The story is due in a few days, (the 16th), though I want to turn it in by tomorrow. 😛 Anything I’m missing from this revised draft? (The editors said I should work more on character, so if you see anything that might be able to make it deeper, let me know.) Thanks!
@daeus @kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield @perfectfifths @winter-rose @ethr…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose If you’re still there, I’m editing.
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Ethryndal's profile was updated 9 years, 4 months ago
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Awww… thanks!
Haha! I’ll agree to that. Personality makes the blog… personal and unique. Hehe. And yes, sassy authors have all the fun.
You definitely just made Brandon’s day. 🙂
Yes, very helpful! Thanks Elizabeth!
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Rolena Hatfield posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal Hey! I’ve been looking around for a link to your blog and can’t find one. 🙁 I’d love to see what you do in your corner of the internet 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Late? That wasn’t even a whole day! You’re fine. Besides, we humor our mothers. Especially near Mother’s Day. It’s the least we can do. 😀
And movies are good. XDGreat, I’ll keep praying!
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