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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *waves and offers pizza*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
That_Writer_Girl_99 *waves and offers pizza*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Delightinlife yeah. 😛 But that’s fine. Ten pages is good with me.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Delightinlife Welks! 😀
And also before you share it, you might want to check that you have the settings so that the people who you share it with/who click the link can only make suggestions for edits. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Delightinlife I’d be happy to help out if I could be of assistance.
And to copy it somewhere, just go to the blue ‘share’ button at the top right and click the ‘get shareable link’ and then just copy-paste that in here and it’d work fine. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Winter-Rose I’m writing a blog post. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
*cracks up laughing and proceeds to keep laughing for the rest of the day* OH MY WORD. Josiah the Wiser is the best. Great job @Ethryndal. XD
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Jane Maree replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@GracieGirl
Heyyy okay so I’m coming to the party a little bit late but here’s my thoughts anyway. Even though they’re pretty much the same thing that everyone else’s been saying BUT SHHH YOU WANTED TO HEAR ME ANYWAY DON’T DENY IT. XD1: I think that you could work that out, yes. Imagine it a bit like the ‘writer corner’ things we have here.…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Heyyy okay so I’m coming to the party a little bit late but here’s my thoughts anyway. Even though they’re pretty much the same thing that everyone else’s been saying BUT SHHH YOU WANTED TO HEAR ME ANYWAY DON’T DENY IT. XD
1: I think that you could work that out, yes. Imagine it a bit like the ‘writer corner’ things we have here. Accountability…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Winter-Rose I’m really glad it’s helpful. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@ETHRYNDAL remember I wailed on this thread that Thorin didn’t have the Arkenstone with him in the funeral-ish scene? On page 3. But we finished watching BotFA a little bit ago, and HE DID HAVE IT! It was on him; he was sort of holding it. Peter Jackson, I apologize for yelling about that. I was wrong. It was THERE INDEED! This makes me so…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Aha, there we go.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Part Two
It was no nowhere in sight. — it says ‘no nowhere’
out you!” My grandpa yelled from the dining room. — ‘My’ = ‘my’
Don’t worry, it get’s worse. — ‘get’s’ = ‘gets’
throwing open it’s doors — ‘it’s’ = ‘its’
My mother want’s me — ‘want’s’ = ‘wants’
need to go home,” Liam eased — period after ‘home’
the door for you,” L…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
No success. I’ll try it in two parts.
@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Judger. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.Part One
“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘ob…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@BethanySinkyRoses Hey! Welcome here. 🙂 My oldest sister’s name is Elizabeth. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Ergh, it’s not putting out my edited post…I’ll try again in a minute.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Winter-Rose Aw, thanks. 😀 I am a detail oriented person, so that’s probably the difference. (Likely something in the difference between a Perceiver and a Jugder. I’m a most definite J. 😉 )
Here we are.Part One
“Thanks captain obvious,” She retreated to the fridge once again. — period after ‘obvious’
details,” She said. — ‘she’…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus That is amazingly perfect. Did you color it?
You should put that as the header for Josiah’s video series or something…opening picture in the video, something. 😛 -
Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years ago
@ETHRYNDAL WOOOOOT!!! Now YOU’RE a superhero!! *crazy spinning circle* Congratulations. 😀 We all knew it would happen eventually!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Winter-Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
I wonder, did the powdered sugar incident have inspiration from real life? It seems like it would. 😛 - Load More
@Emma-Flournoy AAAAAHHHHH! I KNOW!!! *accidentally runs into you mid spin and we both go tumbling to the floor* I keep fluctuating between “THIS IS SO NEAT!” and “Whoa. Is this real?” I nearly choked when I read it. *GLITTER* *MORE GLITTER* *DROWNS THE ROOM IN GLITTER* Woot!
*tries her best not to look sappy* Aww, you’re so sweet. 🙂
*sits up happily in sea of glitter* Yeah, that’s what I felt like when I saw mine. 😀
DAH, I’m so glad you got on KP and all the STUFFS SARAH. *flails* What I might have missed. God is too amazing for my tiny brain to comprehend.
*dumps more glitter on your head and jumps in with you* WE CAN BE SUPERHEROES TOGETHER!!! Now I just need to hunt down whoever said it and bestow Elven blessings upon them. Because honestly, that was so nice of them. I can’t get over it. I posted an activity comment about it, but really, who’s going to answer that? (And for some reason, whenever I…[Read more]
You know you’re not being at all subtle, child.
*sigh* Because it would be dishonest otherwise…I’ll tell you. I answered your comment, at any rate. 😛 And I just went hunting for what I said, in my posting history, and it wasn’t there either. So…I’ll try to remember what I said, how I said it then. Here’s basically how I answered your…[Read more]
*scratches head over what she was supposed to be subtle about* Maybe I missed something…
Aww, it was you? Awww… *melts into dumb grinning* That’s so sweet! I kind of thought maybe, but when you posted that message, it DID deflect suspicion. So you can continue to cackle gleefully. I almost feel bad about blowing your cover now…
*pauses*…[Read more]
@Ethryndal I’m sorry. 😀 I thought you were hinting there that I’d done it—hinting ever so subtly. I beg your pardon.
Naw, it’s just fine. *grins dumbly with you* Anyway, if you suspected but didn’t tell me so, that would’ve been worse; worse than me knowing straight out you thought it was me. I appreciate frankness. XD I do feel quite proud…[Read more]
@Emma-Flournoy OH. Now I get it. Sorry, I had a brain dead moment. It happens to me occasionally.
Yeah, them poor athiests. They just need to read God’s Smuggler. *launches into insane cackling and rubbing of hands* That ought to fix ’em. 😀
@Ethryndal Eh, happens to everyone. 😀
Them POOR little dears. (Sobbin’ buckets of tears.)
Great, now I’m going to be humming Sobbin’ Women the rest of the day.
@Ethryndal *careless shrug* It happens. 😀