@magicalstories0611
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Interesting, I’m really liking this so far! So a few questions I feel are becoming relevant to the story as a whole:
Are the dragons inherently evil, or are they simply a corrupt nation? What is their motives in invading Illura?
I was going to ask about who the dragonborn was, but then reading through some previous messages, I…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I should probably have my characters run into someone.
@esther-cSam and Madeline
A man suddenly jumped out and pointed a gun at the two of them.
“Don’t move.”
Sam tensed up and was about ready to grab the gun out of the man’s hand, but he froze when he felt Madeline’s cold hand on his arm. She smiled sweetly up at the stranger.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Thanks! Yours seems cool too! I love the whole fire spirit idea
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about it if you’re comfortable. If you’d rather not, I respect that too!) (AHHH. I almost forgot to put parenthesis around that. 😅…
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Haha, yeah. Sam thinks he’s tall, but he hasn’t met your characters yet, lol.
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Yeah the height difference is really funny. I actually have this drawing that kinda makes fun of it.

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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I think this story is about 4 years old. And she just looks 7. She’s been stuck in a back and white cartoon world for at least a hundred years.
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Esther replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Question first: I’ve been toying around with a few, but
The Scarlet Freedom is a favorite or just The Freedom.Oooh, that sounds so cool!! 😀
Question second: My favorite OC is Mr. Daniels (Scarlet’s first mate and an old family friend)
But my favorite to write is Scarlet. I think because I subconsciously put my own per… -
Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Actually, I’ll just make Maddie completely powerless since she isn’t in her own world. Also, I completely messed up and called the other character Ben. His name is Sam. I don’t know why I did that.
Sam
Sam stared at his h…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Psst! Avast there. in the forum Historical 3 years, 5 months ago
@she-is-pirate
Oooh. I’d love to hear about your WIP! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Welcome to the wonderful crew here on Kingdom Pen!! Now KP had an official pirate. We should be honored. 😁
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amateur writer!! My WIP is dystopian YA.
Now for some questions!!
1. What is the name of your ship that you sail on? (Cuz every p…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh, Madeline sounds so cool!
I love how she’s so short and she has some super tall guy to do her every wish. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ahh, Ami has a crush on Clint!! So cute!! ☺️
Ami
“Clint’s already meeting all the girls?” Another guy with dark hair and dark eyes said. “No fair. Gonna leave any for the rest of us to meet?” He put an arm around his friend’s shoulder.
He shoved his arm off. “Oh, knock it off. That’s no way to act around strangers.”
“A…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooh cool!! Yeah, I guess it would be more of a mystery/thriller depending on the plot. How long have you been working on this one? 🙂 And is she actually 7, or does she just look 7?
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 She’s from my one thriller/horror story. I’m hesitant to call it horror though, because there’s no gore or death and it has a happy ending.
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @kyronthearcanin @light-warrior-pen @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I really want to add Madeline, but she’s a literal cartoon. Unless I made a human version of her… *shudders at the thought*
Ok, yeah, I’m doing this.
Madeline: looks like she’s about 7 years old, about 3 and a half feet tall, wearing a plain white knee-le…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
AWWW I love Tauren SOOOO MUCH 😍😍😍😍 And just so sweet and adorable just ughhh ❤️❤️❤️ Like that part when he was saying:
“Mom, how did Grandpa die?” Tauren says with a laugh. “Oh, he took some really bad advice to cross a sketchy bridge.”
Wait if I died, I wouldn’t have kids! It’s too late, I’m not changing it.
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