@magicalstories0611
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
*gasp* It’s a date!
Yes!! 🤭 In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??
When what, Tyler? 👀 I want to know…
I would like to know as well… 🤣
Definitely left that open for the imagination or a future short story ὄ…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ok, so I told you I’d finish reading your book by the end of February, and I did! But I only started like two days ago. 🤣 Here are my thoughts! (Excuse any typos, I was doing this in the car, lol!)
Ok, so the biggest thing I noticed was the lack of hope throughout the story. The characters seemed to think about death a lot…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m weary and sick, so I’m listening to Christmas music. XD
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
Probably Baron himself. I love Rya though; she’s adorable.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
I just read through all of this and enjoyed it immensely. 😃 I love your characters so much!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Ooh, I like Terry. The problem with names from this era is that so many of them are taken by adults I know. XD
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Not that I hate that, but I don’t love it either. I want them to just beat the bad guys already.
Exactly. I want it, but only as a subplot, not as the main thing.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ugh. The series was good through book 6, but the romantic drama has kind of taken over, and I don’t think Shannon Messenger has any idea what she’s doing anymore.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Also Brian, Kevin, Julie, Terry
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
@theducktator Found these when I looked up popular gen X namesÂ

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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Agreed. I do think she and Keefe are cute together though. I just wish it would stay a side plot.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah. *sigh* I think Fitz ought to die. He only seems to exist for romantic drama at this point.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Don’t worry, Rory is well loved.
That is precisely when worry is needed. The worst things happen to the best loved characters.
I can’t break the rules of the story just because I love a character. I hate it when authors do that.
Same. KotLC used to be one of my favorite series, but there have been 9 books, the stakes are sup…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Poor kid.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
@anyone
I need names for 4 adults in their mid-forties/early fifties for a contemporary novel. Any ideas?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Oops, forgot to reply here.
Male:
Bartholomew, Egbert,Female:
Veraminta, Peggy
XD Bartholomew’s not that bad.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ryla
Ryla nodded. Liko the handyman. And he did like cookies. She pulled out a small tin and handed it to him. “I baked these yesterday. They’re chocolate chip. You can have two.” She studied him as he took the tin. “What’s it like here? I’ve always been taught at home before.”
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I will have 56. 😈
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