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@elishavet-pidyon

🤩 The Vilder is so cool! The poem really caught my imagination!! I’m getting LotR vibes… Like with the lore and stuff. Your worldbuilding sounds really deep.

@lightoverdarkness6

So actually, this is the WIP with Amidala and Everton. The theme that I really want to portray is trusting God in the dark. They have to deal with a l…[Read more]

@felicity

Oh, good tips(ideas! Thank you! I only saw a few things, bc I’m brushing my little brother’s teeth for bed 😂. I’m I’ll finish reading it tomorrow 😊. Thank you again!!

Also, I won’t be able to RP til later tomorrow afternoon. I’m going to the Nutcracker play tomorrow morning!! Talk to y’all later 😊! Good night!

@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @any-one-else

Sooo, my plot hole!! Yay! *Grins nervously*

So, in my new book, There’s two siblings. 13 year old Asher and 16 year old Iris. The story opens with them living at a foster home/orphanage/something like that. And they hate it. Especially Asher. Then…[Read more]

@felicity

Thats great!! Love it! I’m so glad we could help 😊.

I think I’ve heard of that one. It sounds good! My favorite is Burn the Ships or Fight on Fighter. 😊

@esther-c

But I would LOVE to rant about my WIP!! I’m just not sure where to start… I guess I shall begin with the moodboard. (Man… I wish my WIP had a name…)

Questions?? Comments?? I’m not sure how to begin ranting, but when I do, I can go on… and on… and on… (But that’s what ranting is… so that was redundant XD)

I LOVE that mood board!! What ar…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thx!! 😁

You’re welcome!!

I’ll have to look her up!!

Yeah, do!

Lol 😆

Yep XD!

@mineralizedwritings

Oh okay! yeah, I didn’t realize that. Thanks for sharing 😊!! Yeah, I’m excited too!

@wilder-w

Thank you! My mom helped me pick it out. She’s awesome.

I found it! It looks really good! I’m gonna go find my amazon gift card…

You’re welcome!

@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity

More chapters!!

Chapter 11

Everton tried to slow his breathing. Asher yanked his arm and pulled him close. “Why did you do that?” He hissed in his ear. Ev shrugged him off. “He shouldn’t have said that about us,” he mumbled.

Asher grinded his teeth and shook his head. “You have…[Read more]

@wilder-w

I’ll be praying!!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

I love them!!!

@sarafini

Yay!!

1. On this one are you asking which one I prefer, or what my favorite one is?? Idk which one I prefer 😅 But my favorites would be the 2019(I think the year is right) Little Women and I Heard The Bells. Oh, and Lost in Space is probably my favorite TV show. (The newer one)

2. Paperbacks. Why? Just bc. 😁

3. Fantasy. I’ve a…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ooh, I love the face claims for their fams!! They’re all so pretty/handsome XD.

Thx!! 😁

I just recently found a music artist named Madylen Paige, and her songs are so good!!

I’ll have to look her up!!

Btw, I’ve had “I ain’t worried” in my head for the past like 2 days XD! Thx Everton! 🙂

Lol 😆

@felicity

Wait……were you saying you would tease your sister back, or were you saying you were the kind of person who would smirk back at the awfully smirking individual? 🤣🤣

Both… … … but mostly the option to smirk back. 😏🤣

@wilder-w

Of COURSE, girl!! No worries! I’ll be praying. What is your book called? and where can I buy it 😉😊?

@godlyfantasy12

This… topic… is… AWESOME!!! I actually didn’t know it existed, but I’m glad it does!!

@whoever-else @idk @someone-say-something @hello-darkness-my-old-friend @does-anyone-even-read-these

🤣 🤣

But I would LOVE to rant about my WIP!! I’m just not sure where to start… I guess I shall begin with the moodboard. (Man… I wish m…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Ooooooh!! That makes so much sense now! 😂 Thx!!

I suppose they could’ve made that a little more obvious, even though I know they were trying to make is mysterious, but that’s just my thoughts.

And the choice to have the kids making more decisions is really good, because the first book kind of pushed them around.

@mineralizedwritings

I gotta say, I love your charries so much!

😊 Thx so much!!! I absolutely love them too!! ❤️

Also I like Lukas! I wonder is he just quite… or something up? 🤔

He’s just quiet. 😅 lol.

Have you read Green Ember? I just realized you have a really similar writing style to the author. I’ve only read about 70% of book one.

I haven…[Read more]

@felicity

I agree with Godly. You could do either! Yeah, you could have them escape right before they’re invaded, so you can have some action, but not make it super long. Personally, I really love long books! I will totally read yours when it’s published either way 😉😊. Just make sure it’s meaningful and inspirational!