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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Vance

Alex suddenly turned around to face me and Bren, anger evident in her face…and tone of voice. “Well, Vance,” she spat my name with venom, “which way should we go…?”

I raised a brow, and glanced down the two corridors we had come upon. Honestly, they looked nearly identical.

I shrugged. “Whicheve…[Read more]

@katthewriter

No, I was on my iPad.

Thanks for letting us know!

Totally! 🙂

@acancello

Awesome!! 😀

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Oooo I really like that scene! =D

Thank ya!!! 🥰

However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

You’re good!! 🙂

@gwyndalf-the-wise XD that’s okay. Anwyn is from a forgotten water race that can only speak tellapathicly, which makes it extra hard for her to understand people on land.

She looks mostly human but has translucent hair and fin type things on her arms and legs that are bound and hidden by leather right now

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.

So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…

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@loopylin

Yeah the rock thing is hard to explain but I’ll kind of reveal more what it did to her in the next section when I write it. And I can definitley post that if you want me too when it’s done!

XD I’m glad you liked the nicknaming, I’ve switched their names so many times for humor, language problems, and all sorts of things, but I like…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah I get that XD but I’m glad you liked the style!

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, I’m not sure how to help me either so I understand XD. And yeah I get what your saying about the rock and light thing. It’s definitley good to know that from an outside perspective it doesn’t make sense XD because I know exactly what is happening…[Read more]

Oh, and @esther-c , I just read your scene and I really liked it! The sunrise description was really pretty.

@princesachronicle22

That was really cool to read! Are you going to post more? I’m curious to see what the rock thing is. Also, Anwyn giving everyone nicknames was hilarious.

@mineralizedwritings

That sounds like a really good idea!! 😀

You’re welcome!! 🙂

@katthewriter

I got it on my computer, and I’m seeing the same thing.

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient.

Alright! 👍

I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

Lol XD

Yeah. My siblings don’t like it when…[Read more]

@esther-c

Cool! You can be vague if you want. I am curious, but for the sake spoilers, I can be patient. I’m really bad at that, when I’m asked about something about my worldbuilding, even though it would be a spoiler, I just kinda dump it all out. I need to work on being more vague.

@thearcaneaxiom

Ok, yeah that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying! I would love to hear more, because you make it sound man made to a extent, but it’s also clearly a magical or beyond technological structure, so I want to understand the lore you got going now.

That’s a really good question… because I’m still figuring some things out. XD

I know wh…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

Thanks for setting up the forum!

I’ve already talked a lot about the current nature of my universe on the spiritual side. So while I’ll continue working on that more and mention it here, I’ll likely post more about the different religions in my world that are in varying proximity to the truth.

@esther-c

I will sign the petition!