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@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?

A few…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, just wait!!!! ❤️ (lol, you would be correct! XD)

Ok good! They need love and truth!! 😊

Lol…oh no…😂 Poor Ev and Ami and everyone else!!!! 😅😥😯😟

Yeah… lol XD. This is the second draft and it’s ending up pretty different from the first draft. (Same plot points, different means of getting there, if that makes sense.) I really…[Read more]

@joy-calle

So, I don’t know what advice I’ll be able to offer, since I’m editing my first novel. XD (I know I’ve been writing for a couple of years, but I rarely ever finished writing a book. 😂)

Anyway, I’ll echo what some of the others have said. If you need to, take a break. For as long as you need. Sometimes, when I don’t write for a littl…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, that’s great! 😀 No one in my family loves history as much as me..😭 Except maybe for 1 of my aunts…she likes history. 🙂

At least you have a family member who does. 😊

Ah, wellllll….haven’t written much for them lately since I’m kinda out of ideas/motivation, but they’re doing…uhm…y…

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@joy-calle

😂 I love that ship name

Thanks! XD (That reminds me… I need to throw in another couple on this game show… 😏)

Ooh, that is so cool! I’ve done it for Eliza and Kimbel too, and Eliza is ISFJ-T while Kimbel is ISTJ-A. That’s why their relationship dynamic is so cute cause she’s veryyy emotional and he’s super logical but his softness fo…

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@freedomwriter76

Yesssss, history is so interesting!!!!! I’m so glad to hear I’m not the only one who loves History, lol, sometimes it seems as though I’m weird and the only one who does XDXDXD

😂 lol. You’re definitely not the only one. My dad and my brother also really like history so it’s fun to discuss it with them. 🙂

Speaking of World War…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

LITTLE ARA AND NOVEMBER ARE ADORABLE!!! 😍🥰

@sarafini

I’ve loved writing for as long as I can remember! 😀 I think I was 10 when I attempted to write a book. (It was bad… Like, the chapters were half a page long. XD) I started a lot of other projects. I always puzzled how an author could write such long books. 😂 Anyway, when I di…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Don’t mind me falling off the face of the planet for a little bit. 😜 (I had some stuff to do) Either way… I’m back! XD

Yeah…Ancient History is not my forte, but it’s not too bad, lol XD I really love seeing how a lot of Biblical prophecy (like the destruction of certain cities) has come true and is supported by archeolog…

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@joy-calle

I’m sorry! I can understand why this would be difficult and frustrating. I haven’t finished a book, but go through this all the time with the ones I’m currently writing. Looking at past scenes that I feel I could have written so much better and that I feel now don’t fit at all with the rest of the book.

But I believe this is natural,…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings IT LOOKS SO GOOD!!! I love the fade and softness of the whole thing!! It gives a really cool vibe

And yeah totally get that relief when you just finally finished it XD it is so nice

@mineralizedwritings That looks amazing, Min! I love how it looks like there is no line art and also you drew the hands really well. (And he’s actually holding the bow correctly which makes me unspeakably happy XD )

@freedomwriter76

idk…maybe!!! (lol, okay, you caught me. XD So maybe I WAS trying to make you laugh XDXD)

😊 Yeah, I had a slight suspicion… 😂😆

Thank you so much! I just couldn’t stop smiling after that.

Awwww, I’m so glad!!!!!!! ❤️💗❤️💗❤️💗❤️

Yes!!! Thanks to you, and all the rest of amazing people here on KP! Today’s a lot better already. I fee…[Read more]

@joy-calle

I’ve never finished a book so I don’t know exactly what you’re experiencing, but maybe you just need a break?
If you’re reading something you wrote over and over, it’s bound to start sounding weird or bad. Kind of like when you repeat a word to yourself until it stops making sense.(Or maybe that’s just a weird thing only I do. idk.)
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@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12

Eddie 

“Um…mine is green,”

Eddie nodded. “That’s nice.”

This is awkward. She thought. I feel like Ellie right now. Come on. Just ask him a question back! It’s not that hard.

But Eddie continued staring at her tail in her hands.

I never run out of words when Ellie’s with me… 

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

“Stupid boy,” I muttered under my breath.

Bren had escaped.

But not for long. 

I rounded the corner, my fists clenched.

There was Bren…

But there were other people with him.

I heard Bren stutter “O-Oh! I-I-! Help-please!” He looked back at me, fearful.

He looked up at the stranger, finding the conf…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*bows and falls flat on my face, but quickly jumps to my feet with a wide grin* Why, thank you! I hoped someone would enjoy my crazy randomness XD

XDXD

You are purposely trying to make me laugh aren’t you! 😊

….

It’s working 🤣💖😆

You’re so sweet girl. I feel so much better already 😊

@godlyfantasy12

OH. MY. GOSH.

THAT IS SO PRECIOUS AND ADORABLE AND JUST AHHHHHHHHH 😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Her nickname came from his stutter?! OH MY WORD SOOOOOO SWEET!!!!!!! AHHHH

AND NOOOOO!!! NOVEMBER!!!!!! THE SWEET BABYY!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

(……Can I go after Riven too???…

@freedomwriter76

XDXD Oh wow, I love that!

@mineralizedwritings

Aww Great job!! I love it!!