@magicalstories0611
Active 11 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?
What Sara said about adding in the other siblings a bit more. Most of them I couldn’t name or differentiate. Granted, I can barely keep track of my own siblings. XD
I loved Easton and Autumn! They’re so sweet and loving, and I can totally imagine them as grandparents…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
And @hybridlore
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr
Thoughts on Easton and Autumn as a couple and how their personalities go together? I’m doing some character work rn and I’m wondering if those two actually are a good match… like if they would make a good married couple in the future….
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 8 months, 3 weeks ago
I need to think about the fear responses.
How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?
I’m tempted to say they’d all be fine since they don’t seem to have much in the way of brains…XD
Ryla would try to feed them baked goods instead of brains and would die.
Ardon would probably die trying to protect Ryla, but if he…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Reading everyone’s answers to this question is really fun. I should post answers for my own characters sometime soon.
But, in the meantime, a second question: How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?
(The first question is still open for answers, of course)
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Loopy replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 8 months, 4 weeks ago
Their story is inspired by Chinese fantasy… so… ancient China… mixed with elements of, like, Japan and Korea… and my own crazy fascinations.
That sounds really cool!
I just finished reading a Brandon Sanderson book that was partially based off of Japan and ancient Korea and I really liked that style of world building.
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Loopy replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon I posted a response in my profile because this topic was glitching out really bad earlier
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c Characters still attend class and do normal stuff when their authors aren’t writing for them. They just fade into the background, not freeze in place, lol. Unless you want to write that they were doing something else that whole time.
If you want, I can give you a summary of recent events if you do want to jump back in
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 4 weeks ago
I might RP my characters soon, idk. I think they have pretty bad attendance at this point, lol XD
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Loopy posted an update 8 months, 4 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon ok so the character death topic refuses to load for me rn so I hope you see this here.
I really loved reading the short story! I’m now really curious about these characters and I want to know their backstories and what happens next. Is it from something you’re working on currently?
As for the challenge, I didn’t cry, but it…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
Does anyone here have Facebook? We could try contacting them that way. I think KP has an Instagram too.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@esther-c @keilah-h I bet we can get there before 2026. We just have maybe twoish more class periods and lunch before the dance.
@everyone would people be ok with making classes end early today to give the students time to get ready and to make the dance come quicker? I’m thinking one more class period, lunch, and then one last class.
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Esther replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
Honestly, Slack would be a good option, I’ve used it for other writing groups and it works super well. The only problem is that the free version keeps messages for only 90 days, which could become an issue…
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Esther replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 9 months ago
Ooh interesting first question! Let’s see here… For my current WIP…
Audrey’s primary response is definitely freeze. She just needs to stop, take in the situation, and figure out what to do, although her fears and anxieties often drown out the voice of logic to begin with. And then her secondary response is flight. If she can’t control or figure…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I need assistance ✨✨ in the forum Characters 9 months ago
I can help!! Characters are my favoriteeeee
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
*emerges from the dust and shadows*
Has the dance even happened yet?
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Actually, I think there was a point in the drafting or planning stage that lowkey forgot Brandon existed 💀🤦🏻♀️🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Awww, thank you so much girl!!! 💖 I appreciate you taking the time to read through it all! <33
Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?
No that’s really helpful! Tysm!!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Lois
“I suppose.” Lois felt his worry go dull, like a voice being muffled in a midwinter snowfall. He let the flakes bury it, and turned back to the science project. He’d check in with Brea before tonight.
After identifying the last mineral, a chalky white crumbly rock, the group looked around to find that they…[Read more]
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Loopy changed their profile picture 9 months ago
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Well, I am seeing it now. ;p
Yay, I’m glad you liked them. They’re both part of the serial story Koshka and I are writing. The snippet you got will be part of the appendix section about Onnendel.
I’m glad it was an emotional piece, but not too dramatic. 🙂 I am so happy it made you sad. (Weird thing to say, but true, lol.)
AWESOME! ok. XD What…[Read more]
@loopylin I don’t mean to bug you, I’m just curious, and I know sometimes I need to be nudged a little. Have you drawn any of this yet? I can send a different character description if this one is not working.
Anyway. Just excited to see what you do. =D
@elishavet-pidyon I completely forgot lol. Thanks for the reminder! I’ve be so disoriented lately, I got up this morning and started getting ready for church. On a Monday. 🤦♀️
Anyways, I’ll start drawing Victor tonight :]