@magicalstories0611
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
This is really up to you. I like the idea of the giving himself up thing instead of just being in the way though. It would cause a lot of emotional drive for Dabir later on. Not only because Amir saved him, but because he willfully took it upon himself.
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Esther replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Y’all, this article has so many good quotes!!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
This story is so sad! It’s really good though, well done! I don’t think we need to enforce the deadline. I would want ours to be judged in this case, because I went full comedy, and you were much more serious, so it’s not really possible to realistically compare them in a meaningful way. Thanks for the congrats though!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
ChatGPT doesn’t work with making conlangs at all, I’ve made many heart felt attempts on helping it along.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
So I have a few questions about this. Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French. This is fine, just thought I’d mention it. If you want to pay a little more attention to the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @smiley @sorry-my-brain-broke @anyone-else
I need help.
I’m trying to choose an ending for my novel. I thought I had it figured out, but now I’m doubting it. Either way, someone is going to die, so read at your own risk.
First, her…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I feel like they’re going to be good friends from now on. I don’t know why.
I know! It’s awesome 😉
Ev doesn’t really have any guy friends in his storyworld…. I kinda feel bad for him. At least he has his brother(s). 😂
Ev
“We never knew any family besides, well, us,” Tech said, curling his tail around his legs. “I enjoy creating…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fynn
“I-it’s odd. I-I never have had something quite like it. I like it.”
Fynn smiled and gave Chase a friendly pat on the shoulder. “I knew you would.”
Chase tensed and pulled his shoulder away slightly. Fynn got the message and withdrew his hand. He grabbed a piece of pizza, chomping into it. “So this is your first time eating pizz…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Sorry this kinda contradicts your last rp, but @whalekeeper and I were thinking of having them meet up with Hugo, and I think the horse has moved on without us lol
Dante
As they strolled out of the mall, Dante looked back over his shoulder to once again see an empty lot. He half smiled. The mall had been fun, but there wasn’t much l…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h Hehe thanks
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ev
“Five, actually. Two of them are older than I am. And two sisters.” The boy clarified. “What about you? Do you have siblings?”
“Yep. I’m the middle child. Which is obvious to anyone who knows me.” He chuckled. “I have an older brother and a younger one.” He paused for a moment. “Oh, and by the way, my name’s Everton. Feel free to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh I love that! 😂 (ugh, I haven’t RPed here in a while. Amir is just kinda sitting around watching everything happen. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“Yeah, pizza’s good,” Liv said, her cheeks flushing a darker shade of blue. Fynn smirked at Lukas and elbowed him, pointing with his eyes at Liv. Liv buried her hands in Xandro’s blue mane, trying to distract herself from the embarrasment.
The next few days were sure to be awkward ones, that was for sure.
Awww ᾗ…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
Ok now I have energy to tag people lol @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @rae @smiley @freedomwriter76 (you can ignore if you want)
New Dante art ^
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
Too tired to tag people

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Esther replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oooh, I like it!! It sounds really interesting!!
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oooh, I have an idea for this one… I’ll be doing it!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“What color would you like?” (I apologize if I botched Fynn. Where did I go wrong?)
Oh, you’re fine. There’s lots of things he could have said here, so it doesn’t really matter. 🙃
Lukas
“Unless you want Xandro to return you to the store you were at,” Livia continued. “It’s the least he could do.”
Lukas shrug…[Read more]
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