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I was going to share my thoughts, but then this thread would start to become redundant, lol! I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said. And as for the passage people keep referencing about food offered to idols and becoming a stumbling block, that’s 1 Corinthians 8.

@ellette-giselle

Hooray! Evan got a board! Some of the quotes on Jason’s remind me of my grandfather. He’s an engineer. XD I like Cassion already, though his Romanesque name in a dystopia is messing with my brain. XD With school, work, and dance starting, I likely won’t be as consistent with this book. You may get a week’s worth of comments each…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I listen to rock and metal sometimes

Someone made a heavy metal version of  The Pirates Who Don’t Do Anything. It’s awesome. XD

@theshadow

I don’t usually listen to rock, rap, (except Hamilton. I love Hamilton), or pop, but I LOVE jazz. (I’m listening to Frank Sinatra as I write this). I’d chalk this up with the food questions in w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

No worries! I’ll pm you my email real fast :))

@kathleenramm

KP’s been working recently. My concern is that I want a friend to join, but if there are no moderators, I don’t know how she’d get on.

@whalekeeper Should I wait for Hugo?

I kinda wanna start a fight with Felicity. Either that or start the next class. Kinda miss the twins.

I can ask a lawyer I know, but I’m pretty sure this isn’t his area of expertise…

@hybridlore @theducktator @shadow

Thank you ladies sooo much for the feedback!! It makes me even more excited to dive into the third draft! <33

They are all in a 50s ish red Cadillac with fins, so they’re pretty crammed. Ryla brings lots of cookies, and spends most of the trip looking out the window. Her grandfather drives. Celarent is in love with the car and keeps begging to drive it, but Ryla’s grandfather won’t let him. Iolyn is reading a thick book in the back. Letty is climbing on…[Read more]

@loopylin

I have a very vivid imagination, to the point that I don’t ever want my books made into a movie, because the characters wouldn’t look like I imagined them. I have this problem with other books made into movies too. Characters are more vivid in my mind than real people.

@ellette-giselle Yeah that makes sense with your photographic memory.

My memory sucks. Wanna trade?

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

That’s interesting. It’s fun learning how other people’s brains work.

Can you picture your family’s faces from different perspectives?

No. I can remember basic stuff like hair and if they wear glasses, of course, but the faces are really hard. At first, I can only remember a picture I drew of my dad once, my mom’s h…[Read more]

@anyone

Here’s a weird thing I realized while reading the portals story and I need to tell someone. Do you guys actually picture your characters’ faces in your minds while you write them to the point where you could recognize them if you met them irl? Because I have no idea how to do that. I can picture details like facial expressions or…[Read more]

@esther-c

Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?

What Sara said about adding in the other siblings a bit more. Most of them I couldn’t name or differentiate. Granted, I can barely keep track of my own siblings. XD

I loved Easton and Autumn! They’re so sweet and loving, and I can totally imagine them as grandparents…[Read more]

And @hybridlore

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr

Thoughts on Easton and Autumn as a couple and how their personalities go together? I’m doing some character work rn and I’m wondering if those two actually are a good match… like if they would make a good married couple in the future….

@loopylin

I need to think about the fear responses.

How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?

I’m tempted to say they’d all be fine since they don’t seem to have much in the way of brains…XD

Ryla would try to feed them baked goods instead of brains and would die.

Ardon would probably die trying to protect Ryla, but if he…[Read more]

Reading everyone’s answers to this question is really fun. I should post answers for my own characters sometime soon.

But, in the meantime, a second question: How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?

(The first question is still open for answers, of course)