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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Haha. @dragon-snapper Star Wars. Gotta love it. *grins*
Okay @kate-flournoy To clarify…these are separate arcs?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*runs in* *pants* I…*pant*am…*pant*comeeee…. @kate-flournoy Are you on?
Who’s on? I’m so late… but it’s my brother’s birthday and we went to dinner and he got a Nike giftcard so then we had to go shopping…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Alright. @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@aysia-serene Hello, it’s nice to meet you!
Haha, yeah. I’ve cleaned up the prologue a bit–shortened it to give me a bit of breathing room. Would’t want to give away all the important details right of the bat, I suppose…
Anyways, thanks for the kind words!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Er. Thank you. I think? *runs away* @ethryndal
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Al…right then. *vows never to get on your bad side* Bye… @ethryndal
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
I see. Well. Now that we’ve entertained this…delightfully random conversation for awhile, I should probably get back to school… *waves goodbye* I’ll pop on to reply to my novel excerpt forum thingy if anyone comments on it. @ethryndal @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
*drops hammer in surprise* Goodness, what have you used this for? @ethryndal
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Wait, the scales come off? @dragon-snapper How do you lose a scale?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Wait, the scales come off? @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
*puts up hands* Whoa, whoa. Don’t jump to conclusions… @ethryndal I wasn’t talking about using it on you. Or Snapper. Or anyone on here, really. *looks wearily at family*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy Haha, funny you mention this, I just finished the lesson on this in the Jumpstart Your Novel course @daeus did. What you were saying last night makes much more sense now.
Um…character arcs. I know what they are, but I couldn’t tell you how to actually write one…It isn’t something that I think about actively. Er, something I’m…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@ethryndal *takes hammer* *looks at it* Does this work on people?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Does it? My washer doesn’t agree with glitter… @ethryndal
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Elizabeth replied to the topic MBTI in the forum Characters 9 years ago
Oh my goodness. @kate-flournoy Help me out, I’m not sure I could accurately take the test for Kara… (the MC in my current WIP)
I’m an INFP, and proud. I feel like Kara would be the same…maybe?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Yep! I have work from morning ’til early afternoon, but feel free to drop your response at your convenience. 🙂 @kate-flournoy
Cya!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Erm, the one with Keira Knightly, I think. Regardless, I really enjoyed it… @moriahS
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
In fact… you could make him the one with the complete thematic truth. That it’s better to face reality than shelter in ignorance. A very unlikely bearer of truth— maybe the reader doesn’t see it at first. But if you give him that, his EiL should be the one that wins.
Agreed. @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
…did you just call me sweetheart? @kate-flournoy
Okay. Foil characters. That fundamental difference can be anything? Like how Tam is brash and boastful and Kara is shy and sheltered? Or a physical difference, like how Tam gets taken out of the prison, and Kara stays?
I love the idea of an impact character. *scribbles this in her notes*
Yeah,…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
I’ve only seen the Pride and Prejudice move… @moriahS
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