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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 1 month ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Wow! That was really good!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 Heyo! U on rn?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh hey… what about pierces son?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@lightoverdarkness6 lol! K. I need to go ahead and RP as Ridley I suppose. This will be interesting writing as him…
BTW Ridley has the ability to see golden flecks and “Strings” on people that they can’t see. They represent things that hold them bound, wether to someone else “a favor, blackmail, etc” or something else.
And they show if they’re…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 oh ya! Hitchens was part of a gang outside of the school and tied in with Edrich and Aramis and stuff, and we had Nathan and stuff work for him (but not that they wanted to) and Arthur was once part of that gang when he was younger.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi girl! Imma RP as Ara and November and Paxton!
also…I also want Adolphus and Dietrich to run into Nyx, Lyn and GRIMm and apologize to Nyx…but Nyx isn’t going to accept it I’m afraid….not rn anyway. (Sorry boys 😭)
Arabella
Ara turned, “Iris! Riker! Hi! We’re doing well,” Ara glanced at November, who turned also to glance…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper GAH! This is hard!!
Hm… Okay.. so, this reminds of KOTLC honestly (like my fav series ever)
So, if u wanted to go that route you have the ability to go three directions-
1. what I call a Love Knot, this is what KOTLC is. They call it a love triangle (as do other people but this is NOT a love triangle! It starts OUT as one, but it…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
For now I’m just gonna be Ridley and I may introduce Kainda later
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago

NOW TO INTRODUCE RIDLEY!!
Ridley has black hair like in the picture above and Heterochromia, meaning two different colored eyes. One blue and one golden.
He was actually a lot like November, when he was very young he ran away from home at the behest of his mother, because of an abusive father, and found himself as a stowaway on a ship headed…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper hmmm I can’t really vote without background and more info, can u give any?
I usually always vote for best friend from childhood but it honestly depends on the characters, so if u could give me a bit of info, background, etc that would help!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h I also like the score it’s but now you have two votes for one and two votes for the other XD so ur back to ur indecisiveness 😂
OKAY I AM GOING TO INTRODUCE MY CHARRIES!!!
so they will be from different timelines because uhh unless something changes Kainda actually dies in the series….😅 but yea.
As for Ridley, I actually think I’m…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
These are the ranks:
Your first post, you are a Bumbling Henchman
20 posts: you become a Charismatic Rebel
50 posts: Wise Jester
100 posts: Loyal Sidekick
300 posts: Knight in Shining Armor
1000 posts: Eccentric Mentor
2000 posts: Chosen OneI looked up a pic of a corgi/healer mix and they are beautiful dogs! Ours is a German…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
1. Ah, I see. Thanks for the advice. I will certainly keep rum and loyalty in mind when dealing with pirates.
2. Well, both I guess. 😉 Do you have any pets in real life? My family has a dog and a flock of chickens, which includes four mostly friendly roosters.
3. Awesome!
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Felicity replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 1 month ago
Ok! Here it is! Feel free to critique it as needed. This was written very hurriedly because I was supposed to be making lunch…but I knew if I didn’t write it down I’d loose it. 🙂
To the Friend I Once Knew
Years have passed since we’ve been in touch
The friendship we shared has faded,
Drifting into memories I envy so much,
Our…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(This is actually a point where our theologies may differ, I knew that would be the case, so my fault for bringing it up😅)
(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 1 month ago
Aww, that’s so sad! 😢😢😢 I see how it can give Kylie her aha moment tho…but still.
Yeah. 😢
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Felicity replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 1 month ago
And Felicity, I would offer that in your book while your theme is awesome! Maybe make sure to provide that not All people are like Kylie’s friend. I do understand the theme you’re going for “Trusting God over man” but some people go to the extreme to the point of hating his creation and never opening their hearts again to the ones…
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Felicity replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Hello and welcome! I have never met a real pirate in my life and I am greatly honored. *drops a curtsy* I’m Felicity, a homesteader, follower of Jesus and a lover of writing. 😉
Your WIP sounds a lot of fun to write! I like writing Historical fiction as well, but more recently I’m trying my hand at contemporary.
Following with…[Read more]
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