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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Awww 😭 It’s so sad but adorable at the same time 🥹
I LOVE those aesthetics!!!! They’re soooo goood❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much!!
And joining a new church is a big change!! I’ll pray for you and your family.
Yeah definitely, but it’s been a good one for us since this is exactly where God wants us at the moment.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks, they really are 😊
Thank you!!
Yeah, that’s fair. I use more description later on. I imagine my characters pretty vividly in my head, but I don’t always write it out. Typically I sprinkle in bits of description every now and then. Like, I think in the next chapter or so, I mention Ami has blonde hair. For the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ok, let’s do it! Is Pax just chillin’ in the school rn?
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.
Lukas
“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Oof, I don’t know. Personally I don’t acknowledge God in my stories directly, so from that perspective I’m no genius 🤷♀️
But as a reader, I really like it when God isn’t mentioned but the worldviews of the characters mean something more. You already mentioned LotR, and in that series God is never mentioned – but the way the characters process…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
He’s teaching Dante how to swing dance rn!
Oohh I didn’t realize… you haven’t met his brother… XD Hugo is also around, on a date with his dance girl. They’re just chilling. Both brothers are fine.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Hmm… yeah. It’s super weird, you never know who will stick around. I was once the last person to care about my group (Or more the group of three split into two plus me) and I took way to long to get over it. I shouldve moved on and realized they didn’t care lol 🤣
Well then, they’ve moved on from a missed opportunity. Please…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah that’s right XD I think Fynn was okay with the whole jump-scare thing but Lukas was sore about it
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!! Me too 😊😁
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
🤣 I love that!!!
Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)
Lukas
He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!!
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Esther posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I’ve been reading through your WIP lately. I think I’m gonna try to read through the whole thing then come back with critiques. So it might be awhile before you get any feedback. Idk. I’ll try to read fast tho and get to the parts you were concerned about. (:
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Esther replied to the topic Ember of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂
Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”“Shh, keep your voice down.”
“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.
Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”
“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”
Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry if it’s a bit blurry
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Oh and yes, Amir was.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ok!! Thanks (:
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry for the momentary spamming… XD
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
And finallyyy…
Adrian

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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Oh okay! Thanks! (:
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