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Loopy replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 4 months ago
Wyoh, I can’t think of a good insult rn, but stop
@esther-c First person for some reason really bothers me. There are some books like Percy Jackson and the Penderwicks that I’ve enjoyed despite being in first person, but it still really pulls me out of the story. It makes me wonder why the mc is talking to me or if the book is like the mc’s perso…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c First person for some reason really bothers me. There are some books like Percy Jackson and the Penderwicks that I’ve enjoyed despite being in first person, but it still really pulls me out of the story. It makes me wonder why the mc is talking to me or if the book is like the mc’s personal diary? Are they the kind of person to write dow…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
You’re still oooonnnn *applause*
1. I think it’s understandable, especially in a small space when you’re about to be discovered.
2. They are a little sympathetic, but not a whole lot, since they took unnecessary pleasure in punishing him.
3. It’s short, makes sense, certainly something to expect. I can’t say I have any…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 4 months ago
I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃
@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theducktator @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @beth-torres @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @rae @trailblazer @lightoverdarkness6
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Esther replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 4 months ago
So I need help.
XD
I’ve been plotting in my head for a contemporary novel that I’m really excited about. I love the concept, the characters, and even the setting so much! I just need a better structure for my plot. So far I’ve been writing random scenes, I just have a feeling that when I finally sit down to write the book in whole, it’s not gon…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
1.     Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)
I felt like it was pretty realistic, but I’ve also never written anything like that before or experienced something like it. I a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey, everyone!! Just so y’all are aware, I’ll probably begin posting the next polls sometime after Easter. (:
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
1. Oh and I don’t think him walking slowly and carefully quite fits? It totally could work and you can ignore me here, but typically you’re in either fight, flight, or freeze mode during a panic attack. You’re not thinking logically, you’re just acting on fear. Obviously he’s not going to fight, so I think it would make more sense if he was eithe…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
1. I think it was pretty accurate except that he was thinking in full sentences. Typically when I’ve had an anxiety attack, my thoughts come in scattered fragments or images. Usually it’s only a couple words or a phrase on repeat or it’s just pure emotion and physical symptoms. Nothing really makes sense in the moment and m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Dante
Dante suppressed a yawn.
He had slept in late in the motel room after getting almost no sleep when he was outside the night before. He was exhausted from exploring, hunting pixies, and peer-pressured dance lessons. When he had finally woken up in the morning, he found Jr’s bed unsurprisingly empty.
Dante had left a sloppy note thanking J…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks!
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whaley replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 2 years, 4 months ago
*Pulls out clipboard* Okay, okay, checks out…
His arc is as uneven as the waves in a storm.
Do you think the issue is his personality? Because from what you’ve said, his personality is uneven/confusing for you. Being created in a lab might explain some random urges, but what is the purpose of those random urges in the story? After all, you…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Flying away is a great solution too. You just have to stay afloat, which is sometimes hard.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
You do whatever you want. I don’t mind a slow pace, what with the end of the school year, and this roleplay is casual anyway! 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
We’ve all cheated Wyoh by sharing pics through links. Canva’s free, all you have to do is make an account and upload the pic to a design. Then share the link so anyone can view.
But if you don’t want to do that then… idk, yeah whatever 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I could only think of one book 😭 I’ve read so many though, I don’t even know how I could only come up with one XD Maybe I’ll think of another one later, lol.
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
What’s up with that jingle? I’ve got nothing in my head but the billion songs I’m trying to keep straight for choir.
Haha 😂 Do you enjoy choir though? I did it for a year and really enjoyed it. (Until the choir director changed… then it wasn’t so fun… :/)
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
Ellie outfit and design ideas if anyone wants to see
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@people
Sorry, the creative writing department has just shut down in my brain without giving me any explanation. So I probably won’t be rping for a while until I get my energy back or whatever it is I need. 👍
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