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whaley replied to the topic Dystopian Worldbuilding in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ugh I posted something long and it didn’t work XD
Min has way more experience with dystopia, so listen to her. But I’m working on a dreampunk/fantasy dystopia, so I have a feeling for the genre.
Dystopias are all about taking a philosophy or point of worry in the modern day, and running with it as far as you can in a hypothetical scenario. It’s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️
You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?
You shouldn’t even be alive.
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Don’t tell anyone…they…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Farimiiiiiiirrrrrr
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whaley posted an update 2 years ago
Hey @rae . I found an interesting video on YouTube which reminds me a lot of Chase. It’s about several types of trauma response. Type 3, The Darkness, feels a lot like Chase’s personality in the POV scenes/roleplays you share. I cannot guarantee this channel is accurate within the psychology world, since I just found it randomly XD But it might be…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009
Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
I like the focus on gesture! It’s good that you’re not afraid to draw action. I have a hard time with that sometimes.
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Wait, Cass is leading her on? Why would he do that?
Btw though, the age gap is not bad, especially with the time period.
I think it’s a pretty sucky age gap but I guess that’s beside the point. Does this world have a time period tied to it? Sef was looking at a photograph at one point and it made me curious.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
That’s right, feel free to share art whenever!
(Your post reminded me I have two unfinished sketches I forgot about, thank you for prompting me XD)
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whaley replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years ago
Awesome saaauuuce 🤣🤣 You’re welcome!!
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whaley replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years ago
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whaley replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years ago
Here’s young Aragorn! I focused on how he might look before the events of the books take place.
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 2 years ago
@whalekeeper Thanks! The first and last are on his playlist already. I’m excited to listen to it!
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years ago
No one knows the end of the story and I intend to keep it that way XD
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years ago
Yeah, it’s good to have some vagueness in the outline so you can wing it and potentially enjoy the process more.
p.s. is the picture supposed to be small?
Yessir. Everything on the board is top secret.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
It’s Einstein’s pet hehe
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years ago
OCD is my main drive right now for suresies XD Hope you find this a useful point of help for book 2! If you ever want opinions on story structure or anything outline, that’s exactly why I made this.
Throw up all the ideas on a wall, and get them out of your head so that you can think a little more.
Exactly, it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years ago
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whaley replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years ago
Some tips I found helpful:
– Color code two outlines: one for inner plot, one for outer plot. On my picture, blue is the character conflict, and red is the outward actions or huge plot decisions that affect the world/action moving forward.
– Research Act 2, or whatever the middle of your outline will be, more than the other parts. There are…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
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Thanks for this! I can’t check it out right this moment, but I’ll try to get to it tomorrow. Probably will be after eleven though, since I have rowing class in the morning.
So I watched it, and I’d say it does fit Chase.
About the vacuum, I never intended, when I first created Chase for him to be so dark. Originally, he was just a simple kid with powers who was trying to conquer the shadow of his past. His story was much lighter and more happy back then than now. Once joining the rp he currently is in, I began…[Read more]
I’m glad the video gave you some ideas!
I don’t think Chase harms anyone. Marcel was frustrated with him when he left, but he didn’t leave because he was egregiously hurt, he left because Chase didn’t seem to put any effort into the interaction. Chase gets too hung up on his own dark vibes and believes people will leave him, which ends up being a…[Read more]