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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ah, but what happened to Fel?
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I second this. Don’t.
Yeah, actually, sorry I brought it up at all. It’s super dark. I just find government conspiracies interesting. But I forget there are younger people on here sometimes so please just ignore that.
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
But I’m happy with that
And that’s exactly why some of my characters are just chill and happy. There’s nothing less deep about having an average backstory. I can think of some characters who are super shallow because the writer thought trauma equals character depth.
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Felicity probably has the worst backstory of my characters, but it comes no where near as bad as those. But I’m happy with that
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Sounds like an interesting story. Reminds me of MK ultra stuff (pls no one research that if you’re sensitive)
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Honestly I don’t know XD I told someone I wasn’t going to post the words I wrote because they were too depressing, and it kind of escalated from there.
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I would prove that the Lovedream children have darker pasts, but it’s not worth spoiling the whole thing unfortunately. XD My apologies. You’ll just have to take my word for it.
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I like it! A little Ender’s Game, a little something else. It’s giving dystopian. 💁♀️ I’m usually not sure how to react when people explain backstories since it’s out of context, but it sounds like pretty solid trauma, especially for a whole group of protagonists.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@anybody
I created a mock cover my Christmas short story! I’m not 100% in love with the title, so it might change. Once I have some alpha readers give me their feedback, I’mma share it on here for y’all to read! But before then, here’s the cover to intrigue you. 😋

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Enid replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Immaculate vibes. 👌
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a gramm…[Read more] -
Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That’s pretty much how I picture Baron too. Powerful, but not the best teammate, at least for now.
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Whichever is worst, lol.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
I love themmm!! 😍
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae
Alpha need a lot of perspective reorientation. Actually I have a close friend who once reacted to a puppy in a very similar way, haha 😝 He even used the word scrawny.
@ellette-giselle*Sticks out my tongue at you* What is your most traumatized backstory then?
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, now it’s a challenge. Post what you wrote, and I can almost certainly top it.
Honestly, even writing down the bare facts of the backstory might be too graphic for people. It’s necessary because the end of the story is a reversal of the beginning, kind of like that flash fiction I posted a couple pages back.
I l…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper hehe ok I’ll stop pouting
@ellette-giselle How ‘bout we don’t make a competition out of who can traumatize their charries the most XD
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
The rules are on the first page! <3 :))
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Prayers for my brother please! In the course of two basketball games he’s jammed two fingers and twisted an ankle (he still can’t put a lot of pressure on it). Pray that he heals quickly and doesn’t have to sit out of the games for too long!
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@loopylin :(((((((((((((((((
Okay maybe I’ll post trauma some time. Also you should definitely give us more Fel and Lois. More. More.
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Okay, thank you so much!! I am so sorry I completely forgot about it after KDWC shut down 🤦. I will try to check it out later today!
No worries at all! I only added the draft into the doc today, so you aren’t really forgetting about anything. 😝