@lydia-s
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hehehe….*whispers*
“She’s figured us out!”
Yes, we definitely know each other in real life.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
OH MY WORD….
I just looked at ur charries name Adriene and my brain went to
ADRIIIIIIIANNNNNNNN!!! *dramatic cry*
from Rocky 🤣 🤣 🤣
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka I’m gerd! Thanks tho XD
oh hey this might be a weird question but what color hair and eyes does Eira have?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
XD XD XD
Aplets and Cotlets! Little candies similar to Turkish Delights, but made from apples, pears, or apricots, and assorted tree nuts. Or no nuts, it depends on the variety.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka BTW!!! I’ve been meaning to ask! If it’s not too personal…do u and @elishavet-pidyon know each other in real life or something??
I just keep wondering because ur often on at the same times, u can sometimes communicate with each other and y have that shared AU WIP or thingy lol!! And some others things I’ve noticed so I was just curious…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka whatlets and whatlets? XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
UUUGGHHHH I HATE THIS!!
like uh not ur writing 🤣 OBVIOUSLY!! It’s amazing!! But UUUGGGHHHHHH!!!!!! *dramatically flops onto bed. Again.*
why? Why must u torture us so?!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 thx! They won’t get here for a bit longer… @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @wilder-w
November
“Oh, uh, hi,” November smiled. “I’m November. Th-These are my friends.”
Ara leaned up and waved, a bright smile on her face. All the others did the same, Lyn…the most enthusiastic of the bunch.
Nyx, remained glued in his spot, arms stil…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I am wondering though, Ludwika and Michał, are they just being obnoxious brother and sister, or is there conflict in this family? Because it may just be me, but they felt rather strained.
And what draft is this?
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Koshka replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.
I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth. You did a very good job though. I enjoyed it, and will be hoping for more!
And I should probably read more contemporary fiction. It was a little bit funny on my side to be reading about cell…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon ur good! Holidays are upon us!!! In fact I have a big Christmas sleepover tonight sooo yea!! @koshka heeey!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Eira
The sidewalk was hard and my feet yearned for the soft dirt around the orphanage. Still, I kept up a vigorous pace. I’d be late if I didn’t hustle. My backpack kept shifting with each step, numbly jarring my back, but I had a rythum, and it worked. In a few more seconds I was within sight…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Great chapter!
Um, here’s a thought from another side of things. Maybe don’t use it here, but it could be useful later? I don’t know.
There are other perfectly accurate ways to cover what Ruler has done, one of which I believe would work quite well. Instead of trying to hide it, have him say something like, “there are many ways…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Welp…umm…how’s life? XD XD @freedomwriter76
im wondering if should go ahead and have Corvina and Arthur show up now that most the ppl are here, or wait till the meeting starts and them walk in like real late 🤣
ummm also idk when @elishavet-pidyon will get on, so….
should we eat some pizza? XD XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 thank you!! And I thought so 😅 YES HE IS!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 kk!
So…I was thinking since there isn’t really an army type thing…
How about Hitchens is head of a gang? Outside of school? And Dawson has been in it since he was young, and Nathan since he was just a boy.
And Hitchens…well…he’s the same as always. Cruel, harsh and sadistic.
And yea they go to the school.
&n…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 and I had an idea for how u could do it, because Ik it would be a bit difficult in this AU since there is t really a British army and such lol.
If u wanna hear it
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