@lrose5
Active 3 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I have little idea. Maybe KeePers were discussing the relative violence of the various RPs…?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Oh no! That is a valid excuse. I hope you’re feeling okay. I’ll be praying for you.
Concerning the characters…
Viktor
A pleasant chime sounded from the depths of the library. Viktor smiled slightly.
Then he realized the others weren’t smiling. Hugo sighed.
“You better check your schedules. This might be an unlucky…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, the creep definitely was, even if he didn’t realize it. His actions were begging for retribution.
Not like Rory didn’t practically kill an Agent in that alley, if I remember aright. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
In my defense, they were literally threatening a 5 year old with a knife, and stalking a 14 year old. Those creeps deserved vinegar and The Button.
It’s not like I killed anyone.
*Eyes Ellette and Ruth* XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Cute!
Dragon^2 XD
The dragon gives me so. Many. Questions. (How would a creature like that swallow? What happens when it has to yawn? Sneeze? Cough? Can it eat with both mouths?)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sypher
“Super powers?” He frowned, his eyes falling to the desk in front of him. Tiny water droplets crowded together giving the wood a bubbled, speckledy look. Syph shooed them away.
“Super powers. I like that, but…” His brother’s voice, angry and scared, echoed from a not distant enough memory. “No, I’m a water Sprite.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
YES?!?!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.
Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?
Syph
“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”
Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
I need to write too. XD
Actually though, I’m trying to make my writing itself be consistent. I’m finding it hard to keep a balance of action/description/dialogue. That makes it even harder to write, because what I do write doesn’t even sound like the same book. Or needs a lot of action to connect it, but not summed up, sped through action like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
AHH! Godly is here!
*Hugs*
What do we have here? A November scene?!
*Excited reading*
*Meets this Callan and his cuckoos.*
Who is this creep?
*plots to cause him destruction*
*finishes reading*
Aw, November, it’s not your fault, dearie.
Great section! Grammatically, the writing is rough, but the scenes flows well. Vivid…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Callan’s….oof. I
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
*Slowly freaks out*
November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-
*Freaking out escalates tenfold*
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.
I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.
It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.
My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.
*sees clean gesture drawing*
*is in bliss*
I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…
I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]
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