@lrose5
Active 2 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Alrighty then! Yeah no, they weren’t.
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Cécile
The poor fellow had been whipped again, and again. Angry red welts and abrasions crisscrossed in haphazard fashion. And this hasn’t been the first time, telling from the old scars these new ones covered.
She let out a few Algermain expressions l…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
So um, how have Dawson’s wip wounds been treated? Cause that might influence her response.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Y’all…XD I think I like Joshua
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Annia
She slowly tore her eyes away from the fairy and settled them on the two newcomers everyone else had been looking for.
Tall, in kinda funny clothing. One over five and a half feet, the other closer to six and a half. She smiled and cocked her head, lightly bouncing on her toes.
The…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I don’t think I have any antagonists that are clearly defined enough to add. I mean, ya kinda have to know who they are.
Anyone else?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I was wondering!
@freedomwriter76 godlyfantasy
Sounds great to me! Reúven likes little girls, and Viktor would love to meet them both again.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Dawson, no!!
And he had better be careful, or he’ll get a military nurse called down on him.
Btw, Cécile was a fully trained nurse, on her way to becoming a midwife actually, when the war flared up again, and she got called into the reserves.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, it’s fine, but thank you for redoing it!
Your WIP premise is so creative! And I totally get the “my book is running away from me” feeling! XD it’s happening to me currently.
Although, I do have one story that took a very romantic turn like that. Although, I don’t know if it’s exactly a “romance” because although that part is a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Cécile
Heavy footsteps echoed down to them, tensing the air. Someone was coming.
She placed a hand on Annia’s shoulder, perhaps gripping a bit tighter than nesesary. The girl’s infront of them looked tense and ready to fight. Cécile bit her lip.
Two men walked around the corner, both dre…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
“Well! Now that that’s settled, which, by the way took forever, you guys are really bad at communication, could we get going? I, for one, would very much like to find Lynnie. Would one of you like to guide us, or shall I? How bout you canine?”
Canine? First Wolfboy, now a word neithe…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
Something wasn’t right; this was no pleasant coincidence. Viktor’s mind spun as he took in November’s shaken state.
It wasn’t something on the outside, something tangible. It was something else.
Thoughts.
Forebodings.
Memories.
“That…ah…that would be nice. Better then traveling alone, I suppo…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Aannnndd I deleted my RP. Again.
*Dramatic sigh*
Cécile
She walked at a brisk step, heeled boots clicking in an even rhythm.
This place was nice. Comfortably clean, full of fresh un-sterilized air, with no messy situations to clean up. And none of the incessant rocking of the hospital sh…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Do you want to introduce your characters, or me to go ahead?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hullo! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 3 months ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!
I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write realistic medieval fantasy, with a touch on the allegorical. (So fancy, I know. 😉 )
Your WorkInProgress sounds interesting! What is it about?
Also, short stories are awesome! I haven’t written many; in fact I think I’ve only written…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
How so? Just curious…and beginning to wonder how trauma would effect Cécile.
Sounds good! (Yes, your TRAPPED!! Bwahahaha)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 They can join. =)
Thank you! I haven’t written much with either of them, so I’m figuring them out as I go.
The twins
The little fox kept verbally jabbing at the young man. This was familiar…Vulkasin laughed.
But, Wolfboy? As in, Wolf or Volk? Anyone with a name like that would have to be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Y’all can do whatever you want!
Besides the fact I haven’t thought much about it, so I have no idea. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Alright, here’s for my girls!
Annia
A soft breeze tumbled through archer’s loops, each about nine feet tall. A burst of green ivy danced at their rims having wound it’s way over morter and rock. This room was shaped in a fifteen foot hexagon, three of the sides looking out, one set with a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I love your characters! They are so wonderful!
As for Reúven?
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BWAHAHA! I just had to do that, sorry. XD but the answer is that I don’t know. He… He goes through a lot…
Do you remember the two characters I mentioned on the spoiler forum? Do you also remember that…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Ooooohhh, Paxton!!!!
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin
His brother sucked in another ragged breath and smiled slightly. Or rather the corners of his mouth turned up, hardly touching his eyes. “I’ll be fine. It’s good to see you, Nyx.”
Vulkasin almost wrapped an arm around his brother’s shoulders, but instead rested…[Read more]
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