@lrose5
Active 2 years, 2 months ago- Rank: Wise Jester
- Total Posts: 90
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh popycock. For one thing I actually quite liked your story. For another, style isn’t that big of a deal. It’s mostly a challenge to make every word count.
But I understand if you don’t join. Some writers don’t enjoy that challenge as much as others, or whatever. *Shrug* XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Oooo, yes! Like I said, I adore this stuff.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
(*cackles*)
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh! *Squeel of glee* I love it. Her perspective is so different. And it made a lot more sense. Lol.
(Also something Calion would get himself into. Just saying.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Do you…eh…want me to rescue them? Live sort of ambushed me for a little while.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
(oooooops)
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Good good!! A poignant ending, bittersweet but victorious.
Ah, I still think you could do something even shorter if you didn’t introduce it, but that’s also part of your writing style, I think, so I won’t prod.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
It is! Like poetry made of prose. I adore this stuff.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
My shortest one was 400, and I hardly set the stage
Flash fiction. The strength is in what you don’t say. Don’t worry about setting the stage, introducing characters, or anything like that. Snap a picture of a heart. Let poetry dance with prose.
I’m kinda sorry, but also definitely not. I absolutely love flash fiction, but have b…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
*Smirks*
*Cough cough*
It’s good practice. Seriously. Like sprinting is good for long distance running. Short distances straining with all you’ve got build strength for the long run.
Have you ever heard of the six word story? I don’t remember who wrote it, but one of his friends challenged him to write the shortest story ever.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Haha. I don’t really care for the things either, so whatever ripeness will inspire someone else to eat them is my favorite.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Okay…
@ellette-giselle WAMMM *a snowball creams you* (except I want to see flash fiction under 75 words. *Raises eyebrows*)
@hybridlore AhA! Unsuspecting initiator, meet thy own deeds. *Snowball creams you*
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
*Choking splutter*
How. Dare. Thee. Threaten me. With such a thing.
*Shudder*
FINE.
He stared at me with frozen awe. I stared back. This must be one of those immortal mortals, the first children of blood to walk the earth. The quendë. An Elf. I could hardly breathe.
He was dangerous, this child of blood. Not that I was so…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
A girl in red plaid sits in the college library. Dreadful words – Assignment Due Tomorrow and Proyecto de Clase de Español? -waltz across the screen before her weary eyes. Those words have no business in libraries. Her sanctuary is become her prison. She sighs and clicks on her phone.
Smack
A wet clod of wintery chill flies into her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
EEKERS. IT’S GODLY.
*Ambush hug*
I was holding onto hope that as long as your account hadn’t gone “anonymous” you’d still come back. How are the charries? November, Ara, Luna, Jocelyn, Grimm and Miss Raven? Any adventures? I’m trusting November recovered from the non-canon bout of scurvy.
I’m still writing… Running into plot…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
*Screams*
*Tackle hugs you to the wall*
YOU’RE ALIVE!!!!!
Ugh, I’ve missed you on here. How’s November? Lynn? Vulka has decided to take up skydiving someday, much to his brother’s alarm. He’s also met this girl named Katya… she’s pretty spunky.
I’m still so excited that you’re back. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Yay! Congratulations and a cup of cold cider! That was really good. The Black Mongoose struck again. Struck our heartstrings, that is.
I’m glad you went ahead and judged it. I meant to step out last night. My second story was not coming. Besides, these stories were all really good.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
I expanded what I had to 202 words, but it’s still really flash fiction. Let me see if I can get my other idea in order.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Lol. This is hilarious. I finally wrote a short story I would consider submitting for this and it’s just 179 words long. Back to the drawing board. XD
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