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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Well, it’s a bit complicated. Basically he refused to complete some pretty horrible orders, and by the time he got caught he had started undoing much of his commanding officer’s work.
As to who had it done, GO BEAT HIM UP FOR ME IF YOU PLEASE. His name is Yarvoj. He was Zlatan’s Sotnik.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Of course Paxton can wear that! He’d be really cute…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
So, a quick run down of what’s changed:
This is right after Zlatan’s Solution beat, so he’s a bit emaciated and weak, and has wounds from his beating which are still healing. He’s wearing no armor besides his sword, in an effort to reduce the pain. He’s struggling a bit with redemption right…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ach, I know! But I’m really glad it makes you feel that way.
You do. 😉
Haha! Seriously though, I like the earlier medieval fashions for a reason! XD
William’s “hose” is the same thing.
Awwwwwww, I can totally imagine him like that and it’s soooo cute!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
And lastly, (for now)
William. Brown blonde hair and green eyes, he is tall and broad shouldered. And serious, very serious. Although, among friends he will open up more and maybe even laugh. It’s not that he’s stoic per se, just that he’s… William. Very loyal and protective of those he loves, it’s b…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Yay! She might show up… I’m still not quite sure,since it really does change so e stuff with my timeline, but that the same time, I’m like: “ditch the timeline!” XD
As for my charries getting people… I literally have no idea. Just probably not my other characters. I really don’t know, though, so…
If I added Winifrith, I’d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sounds good! I’ll do a quick RP for the twins, then you can hear them or something? Whatever you want to do. I’m game. =)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Next! (And sorry, I didn’t tag in the last two.)
Yes! Viktor is staying, and I also want to add…
Alwin. Has black hair that is cut fairly short, a rough ivory complexion, and thoughtful dark blue eyes. He is somewhat tall, but thin from lack of nourishment as much as from genetics.
Quiet but driven, h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m fine if you add her. She’s awesome, although she might could cause problems if she ran into Nyx…
I’ll let the others decide.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
IS he is the protection agency? I’m not even an official member, but if it comes to it I’ll capture him myself!
*Drops visor on helmet*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Anyway, it’ll completely change where he is in his arc…
Or maybe I’ll just add her and ignore his arc, because… Well, spoilers.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Viktor. Not much different physically than before, except for being a bit more attuned to fighting, and a little older. On the inside, though, he’s changed… but he’s not sure in what ways.
(Haha, neither am I.)
BUT AN EXTREMELY IMPORTANT QUESTION: does he, or does he not have his eagle? I leave it to y’all.
Age just 15
And just so you know h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ouch, twelve? That’s awful (huge understatement).
It’ll be fun to meet all of them! =D
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Okay, so I’ll try to introduce Reúven (Fritz) first…
Reúven. A laugh dances in his hazel eyes, but the set of his chin is determined. He has the soft calloused hands of a shepherd and the fleet feet of one. Which is a blessing, because he has given those feet to his lame father. What started in fe…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
LUNA!!! Ugh, I love her.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ahhhhh, I love them all. (But Paxton just about tore me up, the poor wee darling. Do you need someone to find him?) And LUNA!!!!!!!!
Yeah, she’s made her own special place in my heart. XD
And she’s really making me want to add in Winnifrith.
So, I think Alyona is not here this time, and Viktor and Reúven are on one of their…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Sorry, I just spent two hours on a research rabbit trail.
BUT, I’ve been thinking. I’m struggling a bit with Vulkasin’s arc, so I’m thinking of proofing the twins six months back, to the solution conflicts of their plots. They’d still have been here and remember all that, I’d just rewind t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
And my phone’s about to die.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Grimm and Nyx are hilarious!!! I want to see those two!
Or rather I just want more of all your characters. Like, ugh, they’re wonderful!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Oops, I forgot to include descriptions for their clothing!
Annia= a swiss dot dress shaped like the one in her pic-moodboard, only the dots are green. Laced brown WWII ara shoes. Her hair’s tied back by a white hair ribbon.
Cécile= Pact nurse’s aid uniform, a long red dress with white borders and cuffs, under a large white apron. Small heeled,…[Read more]
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