Rylie Goodwin

@mineralizedwritings

It’s definitely been a while! A lot of things have conspired to keep me off KP. (Mainly College and Bible Quizzing) I’m still here though. How have you been?

Thank you, I await thy assessment in eagerness.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @sunny421 @godlyfantasy12 @Idon’tknowwho @anyone

So I’ve finally managed to write the rough draft for the opening scene of book one of project Heirs of Ashes. I desperately need thoughts and critiques on it, and ideas for the plot. Really just anything will probably help.

For those who don’t know, HoA is an ad…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m dumbfounded. This story is getting heartwrenching. (Which is, I suppose the equivalent of saying, “good job!” XD)

I do find it interesting how you are contrasting two different alcoholics. It foreshadows trouble if Leon doesn’t find healing and repentance. •_•

Let’s see….

Trippin

Silence reigned over the shore. The waves boke with muted care upon the rocks, and the wind watched them flee away listlessly. Even the birds in the trees on the bluff above only dared to whisper. But then again, the best gossip is shared under one’s breath.

The best gossip, like a new addition of matchwood to the…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, he’s really fascinating! I enjoy how his backstory is intertwined with his present.

Does his scarring play a half symbolic role? For instance, I also have a character who bears intense burn scars from an incident when he was a child. (Although they’re on his hands, feet, and neck [the burns on his face were light and did not scar])…[Read more]

Wow. It’s been a bit since my last post on here.

The twins.

The island was silent but for the crashing waves and the distant music of wind in trees. Zlatan blinked up at the crescent moon, pale in the star cast sky.

“The lady smiles tonight.” Vulka’s voice was low. His brother rumbled in agreement. A soft murmur of some fluttering night bird…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! I can’t wait to see how KP grows in your hands! I can’t really offer any comments or advice as far as finding a job, but I’ll give your prayers for that journey!

Thank you! And I will be praying that your mission goes well and that you touch many people’s lives with God’s word and light!

Christ gave Authority to Peter to bu…

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@rae

Hi! (I’m Elishavet [obviously] and I don’t remember if I’ve met or otherwise greeted you because my brain just will not let me, so welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! It’s an honor to meet you, hopefully for the first time.)

I adore how unique your world is, even as you employ tropes and tools used elsewhere. It’s obviously your creation, and I…[Read more]

*comes out of the shadows where I have lurked in recent days*

@rae

Intriguing story. It doesn’t sound like anything I’ve read before, although considering that most of my favorite authors are long dead that may not be worth mentioning.

At any rate, I do not believe I have properly met you either. I am Koshka, a writer of middle-grade animal…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Leon! My darling Leon! Noooooooo…

And Riker! That’s not true! Both of you need so much healing. And prayer. And just, ugh.

Seriously Leon, try coffee. It’s much better for you.

@thearcaneaxiom

Sorry for suddenly going mia for a bit, one of my co-workers got sick so I had a few extra shifts this week and haven’t been able to get online until now!

Anyway, good to be back again, yet again!

It’s been going really well! I’ve been working, doing some writing (obviously,) and preparing for a two-year mission that will hop…

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@thearcaneaxiom

Dude! This is incredible!

With how immersive the world and writing style is along with how much intrigue and mystery was jam-packed into this excerpt, I’m blown away! Why didn’t you tell me you were this good at writing?!

The first section was actually breathtaking. I could feel each word as if they came alive within my body and…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Hey! How’s it going?

I was just catching up on the most recent posts on this Apologetics forum as there always seem to be interesting conversations brewing here.

I’m totally down to continue our previous conversation or move to a new one (the questions you asked in your most recent posts are quite fascinating) do you have any…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Awesome! I tested out the profiles and they seem to be working on my end as well.

How is the formatting? Is it still wonky on your end?

@grcr @jonas @trailblazer @highscribeofaetherium @everyonewhohasbeenhavingtroublewiththeirprofilepictures

So, I made some changes to the site, and the profiles seem to be working again! Let me…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes! I’m indeed alive!

Sorry for leaving all of you guys hanging, I’ve been out of the country for the past month and haven’t had access to a computer until now.

Glad to be back, but not so glad that the KP site appears to be having some issues lol. Well, hopefully, soon that won’t be the case!

Again, thank you Axiom, and…[Read more]

@grcr

Huh, there definitely seems to be a problem with the programming in the back end of the site that’s causing all these profile image issues.

I’ll see what I can do and hopefully, profile pictures will be back working smoothly again soon! Thanks for letting me know about this!

@freedomwriter76

O.O

That was so horrid and so sweet. I feel sorry for all those characters. So many emotions….

BUT ISABEL IS ADORABLE AND HEART WRENCHING. War is never so dark as when its affect is seen in children. But it’s never so full of hope as when it’s seen through their eyes.

Also, the line where Leon wondered if she’d recognize him…[Read more]

WIPs!!! Huzzah!!

Thanks for tagging me, @freedomwriter76 ! I don’t know how much I’ll be on, considering this is the last half of the FALL 1 semester at the college I’m at, but I’ll certainly be interested in what is going on here.

Ah, yes, I think I’ll spy on this site and maybe join in from the shadows from time to time.

Also,

Hi @joy-calle…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(You just made me think, and now I feel old. I’ve been around a lot longer than most of the people regularly on here nowadays. XD)

Are you talking about before Riker turns himself in, or the end of the series?

In the former case, I’d like to ask if Riker would even go to Leon? He’s already asked for forgiveness time and again.…[Read more]