@lrose5
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
@keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin @ellette-giselle
*Nearly tags myself on accident*
Leo
“Sure.” He smiled down at the girls. Their tails were something to get used to, but he had seen weirder things here.
The hall was long and curved, so that in a few paces they had lost sight of the others. Soon the somber red doors have way to bright yellows…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Oh girl…that broken violin scene makes me want to go get out my baby and hug it. Like, ugh.
*Strokes violin case*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
It’s scenes!!! And Riker and Leon!! ❤️
Aw, it’s beautiful! You definitely break these two before building them up, but I’m so excited for it!
I love the symbolic impact the violin has for Riker. And I love that last sentence in Leon’s story.
I would note for when you edit, that only making a statement once may not give the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Yep sort of. I meant guys dressing as girls, or vise versa. So yeah. It’s gross and called some pretty strong names in the Bible.
XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Oh gracious. I remember braces. I drank a lot of soup/broth, and yogurt. Anything that didn’t require teeth.
I don’t have anything to add to that so- *nods* Well put.
Also, Leon you poor baby. I’ll always care for you even if you are as mixed up as a crushed bag of tortilla chips. *Offers a mug of tea and cookies*
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
She sounds fun. XD
I totally recommend looking into girl’s/guy’s different physiological in fighting. It’s pretty interesting if you find a decent source, and I know it’s helped with my characters.
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
On the other hand, do you mean that you believe it is wrong for a woman to enlist?
I personally can’t find scripture against a woman joining military, or fighting in real life on way or another.
Now, when women fight, things get ugly. My brother and I have discussed this before, having both done similar research, and I’d like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @esther-c @koshka @loopy
Ok, Y’all. This topic has gone deep. XD Wow. That’s good though. We should really pull apart why we are writing what we are writing. I’m getting a fresh look at my own characters too.
There are many facets to what y’all are saying. I will say first off, that the reversal of the “da…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
BiNg!
*screen comes to life*
That would depend on what you mean by “norms”. To be blatant, I don’t like crossdressing, and other such greying of lines. I like lines. I also like to know exactly why that line is there, and if it is a good line. As long as this “norm” isn’t a biblical thing, or crosses a line I’ve personally dr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @ellette-giselle
*Peeks through cracked door*
Totally following y’all over here from the Castle…
So, ai didn’t read through everything above spoken (because my phone is rapidly loosing it’s life, and I’d have to go get my charger to revive it…) but here’s a few thoughts:
Why can’t a woman fight for a man? Not out of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Voice and Diction in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Ah yes! I have not read manga, but I love seeing different characters’ points of view on the same or similar event. (One reason I like The Last Archer. The antagonist-to-friend plot looks completely different when seen through the eyes of the antagonist’s lacky. Not to mention being incredibly hilarious.)
Hmm.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@calyhuge @loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Leo
He shifted Quincy higher on his shoulder. The kid sighed, tucking his fluffy blonde head against Leo’s neck. It looked like Quincy wasn’t waking up anytime soon.
“I’m Leo. I work here.” He smiled at Kate and Brian. “And this little monkey is Quincy, my kid brother.” Or at least, that’s what the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh my. XD He would make an interesting centaur. I like it.
*applause*
Rereading Narnia is the ultimate cure for boredom.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks! 🙂 It was fun to draw.
I can see how someone would feel that way. I’ve never had trouble keeping my mental images separate from movies. It must depend on the person lol.
That would be nice. XD It’s annoying to have different versions of characters competing for attention. I can usually keep them s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Here it is!
In which Aenwest gets lost inside her head, and dwarves need manners
Chapter 2
Travenor walked quickly. I scurried through the woods behind him, feeling remarkably like a squirrel trailing an elk. Sunlight streamed down through the leaves around me, creating a world of green and gold. Birds sang above us…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Aaiii! Save us, it’s a film lover!
*Strangled gasp of horror*
Just kidding. I do understand that, and I have heard of some fantastic things they did with the adaptions, including splendid character interactions and even deviations from the books that actually made the plot more family friendly. Like cutting out the barrow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
*applause*
Gentle warriors for the win! I am now inspired to write better representations of gentleness, purpose, and grief. We need unique turns on these topics.
I think one of the reasons their story is cut is because it’s a story that speaks to more sensitive people. Aragorn looks cool on screen to everyone, and ev…
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic Voice and Diction in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey y’all! I’ve been thinking about literary voice. I know every writer has a different voice, but what about using voice as a tool to set the scene? Like an extended form of dialogue?
This crazy thought spiral took me while reading some of Shalom Aleichem’s short stories (think Fiddler on the Roof). I was amused by the tongue in cheek humor of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Excactly! It’s so sweet, but not sugary sweet, you know? If it’s not in there, then half her character is left out (the real Eowyn, in fact) It’s a neat turn on illustrating healing and hope that really brings a lot of light into the story. 🙂
I think it’s my second time to read/listen to the Return of the King. I read the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes! We just listened to the chapter with him and Eowyn, and I just kept crying and laughing.
*Insert a five page essay on sorrow and love and joy and how they are not mutually exclusive*
*Insert random squeaking noises of happiness*
Yeah… Aragorn/Strider is one of the reasons Faramir is not my only favorite. 😉
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