@loopylin
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin AWWWW! Cute!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
ahh now I can give advice!!!
Yay 😊😂!!
so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!
This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!
Oh, okay!
So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your book is.
Is it light, happy, a b…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin thanks!! So I’d already had the idea of her ppl being destroyed by dragons because I’d realized a long time ago
Wait a min…I’m writing fantasy and there’s NO MENTION OF DRAGONS?!?!
and I was like yea, no XD
but wasn’t sure if that really worked, but then I was looking up pictures, yes pictures lol, of elves and found some…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin XD!! Well, Pax knows that not everyone in the castle is from the same worlds, buuuut obviously he’s quiet and doesn’t realize others don’t know XD XD
And Luna’s like this even in her own world having lived LITERALLY under a rock most her life SOOOO XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I rlly like Carter btw!! @loopylin
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lughtoverdarkness6
Luna
“Do you know who did the magic?” The one named Carter asked, fist digging into his pocket, eyes focused intensely.
Luna’s lips pursed as she thought. Her mind wandered to the laughter of the dragon from before…
Dragons were known to be connected to the lands…to be able to sense shifts in…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @sarafini @e-m-trepke
Cammie
“We need to get out of here!” Beth yelled over the howling wind. Cammie struggled to her feet and grabbed onto Elissa’s arm. Together, the two fought against the wind toward the door. A crash brought their attention to the door, which had landed down the hall. “Come on!” Beth called to the rest of them.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings k! I think @lightoverdarkness6 and @loopylin is in bed rn so we’ll have to wait till tomorrow
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Milo
“If you want to continue speaking with me, come up to the roof.” Aurivis said. Why would they want to keep talking to it? It’s big!
“How about-” The others were already following the dragon. Crosshair shot a grapple to the ceiling and started climbing up it, Feather behind him. Milo watched as most of the grou…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 up to y’all! Tho Easton provoking would definitely scare Paxton so that would be interesting.
ma poor traumatized baby (and don’t worry mineral if there’s going to be any flashbacks I’ll give warnings 😊)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin
“M-magic?” Mathew stutters.
Tauren’s eyes grow wide.
“Woah, I’m so sorry! I can’t imagine how…awful that must have been.” He tries to keep pity out of his tone, but it comes out in his facial expression anyways.
The rest of the group remains silent.
(Ok are they going to look for food, or…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings friends to lovers later down the road 😊 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Luna
She absentmindedly touched her hair, giving a small laugh. “It’s more of a…ombré I guess…I was born with it! Glad you like it,” she giggled, smiling from ear to ear. She’d never been around others similar to her until recently, having been raised…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Tauren and Lesli
Tauren watches from the side as Lesli converses with Luna. Paxton’s eyes dart nervously next to her.
Paxton shifts nervousley before stuttering out that his bear is named Hope.
“Woah, I’ve never seen anyone like you before! How did you get blue hair?” Lesli says with a fascinated…[Read more]
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Light started the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Okay, so this is my new WIP with Asher and Iris. I’ve written 1000 words!! Lol, I know that’s not that much, but for me, it is. Please tell me what you think about it. Thank you!!
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @felicity @orielle21 @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @eli…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@theloonyone @esther-c @loopylin
Feather and Crosshair
“If you want to continue speaking with me, come up to the roof.” Aurivis said, and he climbed up. Feather noticed one of his wings was injured.
She looked around for a place to get a foothold, but Crosshair was clearly thinking two steps ahead of her. He used the grappling hook att…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @esther-c @am-I-missing-somebody??
Feather
A dragon.
He was beautiful.
“What kind of strange magic is this?” he asked.
“Who are you?” Lyla asked.
“Who am I? The humans used to call me Aurivis, if that is what you mean.” said the dragon, shifting slightly. His…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!!! Ahhh I feel like Matt and Pax are totally gonna bond over their shared stutters 😭 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Paxton
Paxton’s eyes widened slightly as the young boy asked about his bear, his words stumbling out, just like Paxton’s often did.
He…sounded just like him. Though, a tad braver.
Paxton glanced at Lu…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
These two are so friggin cute!!! I love Matthew so much❤️❤️❤️❤️
IKR!?!? Omg SO CUTE!!! Awww, thank you!! *Tells Matt and watches him blush* Anyway XD
Aww, Pax!! He is SOOO CUTE!! Thank you for waiting for me 🙂
Haha, Tauren was ready to go check out that dragon XD. Thank you for waiting for…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @starofthenorth @arien @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @sarafini gasp I never added @felicity to this!!
So, if I do this it’ll obviously still be being written after Christmas is over 😂
I gotta figure out how to start it and everything, so if y’all wouldn’t mind…[Read more]
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