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Lucille

“I like roses but they’re better without the sharp parts.” Lucy pulled a loose rose off the wall and pinched off all the thorns she could find. She handed it to Mel. “We have hydrangeas and chocolate lace in our courtyard.”

She muttered the name chocolate lace to herself. It reminded her of a time she found dried chocola…[Read more]

@loopylin real thoughhhh

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Also, I’ll share some snippets when I finish things.

And I will inevitably fangirl when you do

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What’s kinda funny about all this to me is I’m still figuring out how much obvious Christianity will be in Leo’s solar system. It’s not Earth, so I won’t be referencing any biblical stories ect. except maybe creation, but it’s also pretty clearly not an allegory, and I’m not making up a God figure. So… it’s fun. XD I…[Read more]

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Lucille

Lucy slowly let go of the vine and walked a few paces, studying the way forward.

Ahead of them was a narrow path with arches over it – an overgrown arbor. Yellow roses and leaves grew so thick that the wood beams were almost completely hidden, like furniture draped in a golden blanket. The leaves fluttered in the breeze,…[Read more]

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Lucille

“Speaking of, I’m starved.”

The wall ended. Lucy found one of the vines tangled on the top, a thick silver tendril, and hacked at it with her hatchet. One end of it fell to the ground, and she slid down it like a drainpipe.

She looked up at Mel, holding the vine steady. “So you didn’t get taken?”

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Lucille

“Outer fields.” Lucy stopped to help Mel over an extra large mound of vines. “Do you know how to get back to Colorado?”

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Lucille

“Thanks. I’ve practiced. Where are you from?”

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Lucille

“…That way.” Lucy pointed. She stood up and began awkwardly walking along the top of the wall, arms and jacket winging out. “Are you lost too?”

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome! it was a very enjoyable read!

@loopylin your planet worldbuilding is awesome 😉

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It is, but Qs have a better vibe.

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Dante would not survive twenty minutes there.

Why do I feel like the characters are going to crash-land there? It’ll be an episode of a tv show where it’s Dante’s POV and he’s absolutely miserable

The natives are Lemonhead’s species (still no name). They invented space travel first. It’s also the only planet with rings like Sat…

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*also stalking*

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Qilanans sounds cooler. But then again, I’ve always liked the letter Q because of Quack.

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Well that makes sense. Especially because Liko has the design and skills of someone who belongs to a technologically or at least extra-able advanced group. What are Fainne and Gicel like?

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*Applause*

Ooooooo. I liketh. I liketh a lot. Me wants to eat this book.

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Oooo, utopia. I’ve always been kind of interested in those but they’re rarely explored in books or media because dystopias are more appealingly edgy. If they’re the first planet to be visited and the third to develop the technology, does that mean space travel is pretty easy for them? Like moreso than for other planets’ inhabitants?

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Lucille
“We were looking for a way out of the maze. He was helping me and – hm, well, maybe I wasn’t helping him any. I don’t know where I am now.”
The hedges grew in the typical labyrinthian fashion, but Lucy knew better than to think Gabriel was nearby. The plants themselves were different – the moss more emerald and the leaves less…[Read more]

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Having fun having him explain too. And seeing Rory’s reactions. XD

Leo

“Here God made light. It wasn’t light from a star or something. He just said ‘Let there be Light’ and light was made–unrestrained, u contained light. Then God divided the light from darkness. Here he makes a distinction that there will be places…[Read more]

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Why would you apologize for that.

Not sure why either…XD

*Waiting for info dump*

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Rory

He looked down at the page, still thinking over what Leo had said. “And God said, “Let there be light,” and there was light. 4 And God saw that the light was good. And God separated the light from the darkness. God called the light Day, and the darkness he called Night. And there was evening and there was morni…[Read more]