Loopy

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, I’ve considered a few options like that, but my main problem is, that this has already happened in the book. Simply a side characters view point of the scenario. She is assumed to be in leauge with the villains, but this is how I’m showing that she wasn’t at all.

So it was hard for me to state it as a full flash…

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@loopylin

Yeah the rock thing is hard to explain but I’ll kind of reveal more what it did to her in the next section when I write it. And I can definitley post that if you want me too when it’s done!

XD I’m glad you liked the nicknaming, I’ve switched their names so many times for humor, language problems, and all sorts of things, but I like…[Read more]

Okay so if anyone is interested I have a snipit of a chapter I’ve been stuck on for a while, honestly it’s probably the unconcious guilt of making my characters suffer XD

So some of you may know Anwyn from the KP Library. But anyway, if anyone is interested in reading it (though it’ll be a little out of context) and could give me some ideas on…[Read more]

@loopylin

XD That would definitley be entertaining for me

@princesachronicle22 heeeey u wouldn’t wanna RP as Zyrin sometime would ya? up to u 😊

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin

Arabella

Ara gazed at the crowd, slowly lowering her arm that was stretched over Asher. Suddenly, a very small girl pushed her way through the crowd.

“Hello! I’m Eddie. It’s nice to meet you. You have a reall…[Read more]

@keilah-h @loopylin @mineralizedwriting

SERIN

Where in Depth’s Pools do they keep their healing beds? Serin thought to herself.

Water from the fountain streamed from her hair and onto her skin. The silvery green saliva from the monster had dried near her puncture wounds, and now her muscles clenched and convulsed as the poison started to spread…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

Lol

Of course!!! <3

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper @loopylin @anyone-else-who-cares-to-critique

Hey, y’a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 this is gonna be so great because if Ara mentions November I wonder if he’ll remember that little Redheaded boy who was 14 when he last met him XD XD

@loopylin u wanna go next?

@loopylin yea that’s one of the things I don’t know 😅😅😅

I do know what the dryads look like tho, hopefully I got it across well? It’s easy to imagine the females (and the males for me but it might be harder for others cuz I’d have to explain? But hopefully I did ok explaining? Lol)

But sometimes the females wrap their around around them like sk…[Read more]

@loopylin who in Yalls group got hurt again? I couldn’t keep up XD XD

@keilah-h

Elliot’s reply…lol!

😁 Yes. He is sassy and I love him.

@loopylin

Milo

“Alright.” Milo and Feather stepped back inside the castle and made their way back to the room where the rest of them should be waiting. They could hear some talking through the door as they approached.

Cammie

Cammie sat, curled up against the wall, unc…[Read more]

@loopylin @theloonyone Elliot’s reply…lol!

Crosshair

“Oh, I would never imagine it,” Elliot muttered, but didn’t say any more until they were deep in the hallways. Then he spoke up with “So how long have you two been here?”

“Too long.” Crosshair growled. “Actually, from what I can tell, only a standard rotation [24-hour day] or two. This…[Read more]

Forgot to tag people XD

@freedomwriter76 (Ik u don’t “technically” worldbuild but I still appreciate ur input!) @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon (btw tell Koshka I said hi!) @esther-c @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

@loopylin yea they are sorry let me RP! @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76

Arabella

Ara gripped Asher’s hand, giving it a gentle squeeze as the two traversed down the pitch black hall. She sucked in a deep breath, trying to rid herself of the memories that passed by her mind’s eye.

“Arabella…?” Asher’s voice whispered, warbling slightly.…[Read more]

@loopylin

You could not do a language-based magic system and do something with sigils. Basically, symbols carved into the rock would do things.

@loopylin

Poor Dante!! And yes I ship him and Ellie by the way 😉

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah I think some poisens can infect just by touching your skin but I think Dante will be fine in this case, right Loopy?

Not sure what’ll happen to Serin though, I think poisoness sea creatures normally paralyze things they bite? I have no idea XD

@loopylin

Sweet! Ok, so you seem to be suggesting that the dragons were the ones who originally bore the artform of magic. Then, they taught it to the humans. But the humans need what ‘dragon stone’ to preform magic. So what is dragon stone? Is it something made from dragons? Perhaps dragon scales or something? If it’s an actual piece of a…[Read more]

@loopylin

I kinda like both. I think some work better for different stories. For example, I have a story based off of Alice in Wonderland that has a very soft magic system. The explanations for why things happen are very vague and often nonsensical, because if it were any other way, it would no longer be Wonderland.

But then there are great…

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