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@grcr Why not then:

Name: Mick Lawrence Mundy

Age: 30, but he is a little more rugged than most cause he’s an outdoors kinda guy.

Personality: Very much a tough guy and a loner, most of the time at least. (His bio page on the site for the game I pulled him from says this: “In his former life as a tracker of dangerous game in the u…[Read more]

@rae

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

AHAHAHA This is canon now.

it’s just be like this:

Scout, looking at the food on the table: I could’ve sworn I set out more slices of cheesecake.

Huntress: Since it wasn’t me, I’d blame Sniper.

Sniper: W…

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@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3

@savannah_grace2009

Hey giiirrl. :] I’d love to brainstorm with you. I’m going out for lunch right now but I’ll be back home in a couple hours and we can exchange emails!

I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

@ellette-giselle

K!

It looks good! The blurb size and length seems right, too.

@loopylin

Yeeaah, I’ve been bad with the roleplays too. I’ve been busy, I suppose. Stay-at-home vacation with the family and getting together with friends before they go to college.

@rae

Happy birthday!!! That sounds like a super cool outing. I love exploring shops on vacation or whatever, and doing it on a birthday sounds even more fun.

@whalekeeper

On here works great!

Also, any thoughts on the book cover?

Oof I have to think about this.

@ellette-giselle

Do you want feedback on here or through gmail? (Either’s fine)

@keilah-h

also mmm, I love cheesecake.

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah

Thanks everyone!

Once you’re done with that one, I have a completely different pair of characters I wanna see in your style too, but if someone else wants their character drawn I’ll let them have a turn first.

and here’s a model of her I put together:

The little snake is just there for fun. You don’t have to draw him (unless you want to)

Here’s one drawing I have of her, you’ve seen it before most likely:

(feel free to draw Sniper with her if you’d like lol. If you decide you want to, I’ll post his stats. Although given how much I talk about him you probably know all you have to in order to draw him, heh)