@loopylin
Active 37 minutes ago- Rank: Chosen One
- Total Posts: 2539
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 1 hour ago
I’m glad you thought so.
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 1 hour ago
*pffft*
-
whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 2 hours ago
Get to work, or I’ll pile you with snow until you’re snowmen!! @koshka 💨⚪ +4 @elishavet-pidyon 💨⚪ +4 @power 💨⚪ +4
-
hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 2 hours ago
Sorry I couldn’t help making this
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
Asher found a girl! 🥰
I know!! I’m so happy!
Eric is kinda wicked, and Noah and Darrien enjoy it way to much. lolololol
Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁
Yeah, I know.
-
hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
Gotcha.
Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁
-
hybridlore replied to the topic Free will in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 2 hours ago
Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.
When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.
I say keep it
-
Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!
-
Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 2 hours ago
How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?
I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?
lolol.
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 2 hours ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”
“Oh…
-
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 3 hours ago
Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.
Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.
-
hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 3 hours ago
True.
Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.
-
whaley replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
@princesachronicle22
You’re in luck; I, a bystander, just finished reading through this entire roleplay for no reason. Goodness, this one’s pretty funny.The ducks took one look at each other and went to opposite sides of the pavilion
I just about died when I read this.
I think basically everyone (at least almost everyone) found out about the…[Read more]
-
Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
-
Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
-
Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
-
PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 16 hours ago
@theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin
that would be cool! I’ve been so dead to KP like for half a year, I’ve been so busy 😂😭. And I’m kinda really lost as to whats happened in this RP, would any of y’all mind recapping me?
- Load More