Loopy

@keilah-h

Yeah, well “so far” is the key term, my girl.

We’ll see.

@hybridlore

Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?

I don’t think it should, but I’ve seen some people go at it like They are the ones s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle not a ramble! At least you’re rambling about your writing and not about something random…..as I do quite commonly…..eheheheheh you remember THOSE conversations which I’m NOT gonna bring up on this forum after this lolllll

And I think 13 is fine tbh. Your books are actually not that bad in terms of violence so far.

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?

I’m also pretty…

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@keilah-h

*cough cough*

I knew that.

*wince*

Sorry i forgot! Okay, so I have an older age range. Good.

I would definitely like some advice (maybe later on) in how to classify these books. I was thinking YA, but that could include 13 or so year olds, and the violence level in these books might be to high for that. I mean, they are kinda dark…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow

Barnes

“Might as well be an exoskeletal crisis,” Barnes said. “Soul-searching is illegal in nineteen counties. You have always been you, Angelo, have a cup of tea.”

Hugo looked back and forth between Reid and Tenz. His eyes became the slightest bit shiny, expression hidden by his scarf. “I can’t go to anyone for help, Tenz. They…[Read more]

@keilah-h

They were characters from a very old WIP.

Glad you like it.

@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll

@ellette-giselle 17, almost 18. Remember how I was making a big deal about Sabina getting married that young because I could barely imagine getting married at my age? lol

Kenna and Zeke’s kids!!!

@keilah-h

Glad to hear that!

I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.

Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?

@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Okay, that’s two against me.

Glad you like the map!!

I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………

what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?

@hybridlore

Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.

I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.

Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!

also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.

@jonas

Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.

I guess give us a few in case he decides to make his way over here. Otherwise we might just have to abandon him.

@rae

No worries. It’s okay to call him Barron. I think i have his names down now.

Oops, I forgot to call Baron Brutus in the rp. Sorry.

@ellette-giselle

Totally gotcha. Sometimes it’s just good to get all your thoughts on a scene down, even if they don’t all end up in the final draft.

Sure. Hopefully you got what I meant, since this is kind of a controversial topic in Christian writing circles. In the end, it’s really up to the author who knows what’s best for their story h…[Read more]

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.

@hybridlore

Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.

First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.

You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.

So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]