Loopy

@theshadow

thanks so much!

I wish I could say things, but I’m keeping my mouth shut until I judge lolol.

@keilah-h

there’s also a convo between Medic and Demo about how every time Medic tries to give him a new eye, something bad always happens to it and them as a result, and Medic’s come to the conclusion that Demo’s eye socket is just cursed or something.

Eh, that sounds right XD

@ellette-giselle

Here’s my story, sorry if it isn’t great, I kind of rushed it lol.

The Final Minutes of a Dying Man

Eyes closed, he began to think.
And now, to death I go. The pain had subsided now, he couldn’t feel it much.
And as for life, what I have i to say? I laughed, cried, feared, failed, conquered, and loved. I saw many things, such…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!

Glad you like the drawing.

@highscribeofaetherium

Well, thanks for the compliment. 🙂

@ellette-giselle wow!

also don’t worry about your signature being messy. That’s just how signatures are.

@liberty oooh I loved that!

@liberty

Thanks!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you so much!!

Wait, you think my signature is neat? it’s so messy! lol.

@liberty

I can’t seem to get into your document, and I requested access twice……..

@hybridlore

Okay, I’ll take a look at it. I believe the first draft did have the original CS Lewis quote, (though I gave it to Darrien) I can check the original quote and then reword more appropriately.

Lol. They are chaotic. They range for four to twenty-four. lol. a wild bunch.

@ellette-giselle

I figured you probably knew, but just wanted go make sure. Because otherwise I would start rambling about stuff without defining things, like I normally do. XD

Yeah, I either lump it into personality or give it a category

@ellette-giselle

That’s true, the rewrite was.

The one paragraph where you said something along the lines of, make the enemy rejoice when you’re out of the fight, seemed taken straight from that quote (C.S. Lewis?) I could see modern believers saying something like that, but I don’t think it would be a well-known phrase in this world. Maybe p…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Hey, the last part was happy too.

Any thoughts? What do you think of the Caddicks so far?

@ellette-giselle

Yay!!! A happy part this time!! 🥲

@theshadow

XD that would be very in character.

yeah, I read that in one of the tie-in comics and was like “ohhhh, that actually makes a weird amount of sense.”

there’s also a convo between Medic and Demo about how every time Medic tries to give him a new eye, something bad always happens to it and them as a result, and Medic’s come to the…[Read more]

@liberty

Thanks! I just requested access

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION!!

Happy happy day! It’s super long!!!

 

Joseph sat on his bed and carefully opened the journal, his fingers trembling with the wave of emotions that filled him. Memories of Aaron flooded his mind, and for a moment he was too blinded by tears to…

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@whalekeeper

I know what Psychology is, I just wasn’t sure what you were meaning. lol.

I have that sort of thing, but not in it’s very own category. It normally ends up in notes, or in a sub-part of personality. (example: he is this way because…..)

So yeah, I just never had an explicit place for it.