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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.
What if you could only save one of those three?
(And I’m totally just being a beast because no matter what you say I’m not changing anything.)
Eh, I wasn’t surprised.
I didn’t think you would be surprised, I just wanted to know thoughts. Like does it mak…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
How close are your character personalities to the real person? I can’t say I make a one-for-one imitation of the person. Recently I was inspired by a friend’s hyper deliberateness in friendships and used that as a trait, but I used barely anything else.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
And finally, my dog, because he’s definitely art. Definitely relevant.

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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago

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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Eh, I wasn’t surprised.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago

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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Joseph, Amelia, and Beric. I don’t know her brothers well enough yet.
I’ve let myself be deceived. My whole life I thought I’d never have the strength, and I was right. But it’s not about me at all! None of this is.” Joseph waved his hand to punctuate his words. “My whole life I’ve been worried about what I can and can’t do, but…
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
Some art from the National Gallery when I went there recently. Sigh, my camera is not good, but it is one of my favorites.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
No comment about the Uncle betraying them?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Ellette!!!!! 🥺🥺
What are you going to do to them??
lol. Wouldn’t you like to know?!
Who would you be the most upset about if I wipe them all out?
Glad the scene is good.
Preachy? In what way?
I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺
That emoji contradicts those words. l…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
That is so cool!
I do that sometime, but it’s mostly with personality, though sometimes I keep physical character descriptions that fit.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Good scenes, though. Joseph was a tiny bit preachy when he had his character shift arc, but it worked since that’s been his struggle since the beginning.
I can’t wait to see what happens next. 🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
That reminds me of a really cool, sweet mom at church (one of my favorite people) who approached me with a YA fantasy book. A friend of hers, whom I didn’t know, had written it and wanted some feedback from teenage girls.
I and my friend read it, and we coincidentally had one favorite character that stood out. She was…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/30/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(it’s loonnnggggeee)
“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.
Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”
“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.
Amelia smiled…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle lolllll
tbh I’ve never made characters completely based off people I know. I’ll let them make self inserts and put them in my stories, but it’s always them in charge of who it’s gonna be.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I haven’t done the reading challange. I can’t remember why I didn’t. Was there a prize at the end?
and they made one of Hand on the Bridle!!!!!!
WHAT!?!? Where is it!? It’s not on the app yet! *sob*
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