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@raxforge

Mateo shook his head in misunderstanding, “No, I’m very old. Been dead for a long time.”

I died.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I can’t wait to see Marcel’s reaction.

@hybridlore

*smiles and nods* yes, put those characters through the fire, and we’ll see on the other side who were the true ones, and who were the pretenders. 🙃

SIX?!?!

hold on a sec…. six might be right.

Ya gotta give me names y’all!

@liberty

lololol.

Uh…. not too much. He liked reading, (more than Julian) but there honestly wasn’t a lot of time for that. Ya know what? Should I send you the first bit of Book 2 and you can read about him?

From what I know about living with my brother…no sharing. Guys want their own journal.

I’m starting to suspect that, and I’ve b…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oops I totally missed this lol!

I get a lot of references from Pinterest, but I’ve heard theres a growing amount of ai art on it so ughhhh. There’s still good stuff on there. I usually use references from shows I like. I recently watched a Donghua called Link Click (wait I haven’t ranted to you about this yet lol, it’s such a great…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Stuff mostly about the medieval ages, or about sword fighting. For instance, feudalism and the exchange between peasants and lords, or the training of knights from pages to knighthood. However, at one point I was researching Irish slang for a story idea, and discovered some interesting slang such as “not looking the full s…[Read more]

@esther-c

Poor Hallie, hopefully her siblings don’t embarrass her (right?). Nice job, the chapters are good. One thing I did notice though is that in a couple of sentences you explain why a character is doing something, like “to ___” and I think you could leave that out sometimes for the reader to figure out why they’re doing something for themselves.

@ellette-giselle

Use the dash if you want it to read as a sudden horrifying shock, use the dots if you want it to be a slow realization that settles into horror.

Ah, okay that works better. Thanks!

I have been swamped lately, but we’ll see if I can have her to you this week.

Take your time! Thanks for the comments, I’m glad the chapter gave som…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Indeed….

@hybridlore

Yay, will hopefully read it soon.

Also… don’t hurt Everett please!!

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I count six that Ellette has killed… but pretty much everyone in her books has almost died at least once. 

I want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!

 

I just want yo…

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@hybridlore I don’t WANT you to beat him up specifically.

I just want you to challenge him, like any good character.

@liberty

Yes, that’s how to pronounce it, but it would be said with a thick German accent, not our American one, so it would sound a little different. It could also be said Helen with the “e” still added.

Oh, come on! Adrian wasn’t always dead. I would like to know what he was like when he was alive on earth.

Shy. Rather a bit of a coward s…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, i thought I said he might try to get up later that day.

I can fix that.

I thought he was going to be sick for longer than that—I don’t know, just seemed like something you would do.

Hmmm….. I can do the unexpected sometimes. It was just a cold.

This time.

Nice to see Joseph and his family mentioned again. I miss the…

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@keilah-h

69 full length novels written…..

1 current

1 I’m editing and posting on here

80+ plotlines I need to turn into books.

@hybridlore

Everette has faith, and he seems like a strong character, but I can’t be sure! I want to see him put to the test, and I want to see him face consequences for that choice, even though he chose the right thing, and I want to watch him struggle through and stand firm in that!

Count it all joy, my brothers, when you meet trials of…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ten?!?!

No, it can’t be THAT many?!?

Who are the ten?

Is it really ten? Wow!

@the_lost-journal

also you can not really take a hint… I was clearly venting out my trauma that I have from soccer and the reason I hate it…

I get that, I could guess you’d had a bad time, but that is no excuse to say unkind things or harsh things about others. Just because you have emotional scars doesn’t mean you can lash out at people or gen…[Read more]

@hybridlore
😐👌 I will do that

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t think so… Like I said, I’d have to look at it.

@whalekeeper

Yeah, maybe try.

@godlyfantasy12

now how did I forget to tag Whaley *virtual facepalm*

Lol don’t worry, I’m still reading. 😂