Loopy

@loopylin

Thx! It looks like your bunny’s mind is filled with bubbly dreams. Reminds me of a gumball machine 😋

@theducktator @elishavet-pidyon

Yes, it was quite fun. :p Although I slept in for a while after.

Did you go with anyone?

I went with my friends. Half of us had partners, but the other half just wanted wholesome group dancing. It was a good mix.

@freed_and_redeemed
The hurried navigation through the pews is all too real, lol.

The brunette shrugged.

This is the feminine version of a french word, so unless I’m misunderstanding who is speaking here – I think it’s Riker – this should be brunet. Same difference between blonde and blond.

@hybridlore

Especially with the way that you left off the last book–with Rolf, Roland, and Aelic getting separated from Leon and Julian because they wanted to go visit their family (right?), I think you should remind us.

No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction t…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

What exactly IS your job?

Huntress: Well……We used to be mercenaries. Hired guns. We were supposed to guard our employer’s mine in an asteroid belt from his brother’s team, but it turns out it was all a ruse and the only reason we were fighting was because a sneaky Sunekite provoked the battle as revenge for the brothers’…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like it where it is as it is sort of the first rush of the downhill slide we’re about to hit.

Oh no.

@ellette-giselle

🤦🏼‍♀️

It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.

Do I really gotta remind the reader?

In the previous books in the series, the POV characters switched every time. Especially with the way that you left off the last boo…[Read more]

@loopylin very cool!! The drawing reminds me a little of a character in one of the video games my brother plays. Unfortunately, he happens to hate her cause she’s indirectly responsible for killing him and making him lose a really good win streak. lol

@loopylin

aw cute!!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Sorry! I was gone for a minute!

YAY!!!

Ooo, poor Leon. 🤣

I like this! I can’t wait to actually read it in the book! I’m super excited!!!!

@linus-smallprint

Yes, because some of us are too stoopid to remember.

Oh.

Okay.

Rough as in violent, or rough as in not turning out the way you hoped it would? Guess I will find out.

…
…
… defiantly violent rough, yup.

Yeah……. and sad. And Brutal.

I know Hans, but who are these two?

Lieutenant Roth was the man Hans and his compa…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle hehe, ok then🤭

(not a finished scene btw, but a snippet)

The Schind family looked exhausted, barely awake.

Not that Leon doubted that he probably looked much the same.

Thoughts of Germany had reawakened thoughts, memories, and even nightmares that plagued his sleep and sometimes even his waking moments.

He shifted on the…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Oooo! Fun! I can’t wait to read it!

YES!!! YES SHARE IT! SHARE IT!!

@ellette-giselle hehe thank youuuu🤭

and no, this is actually a section from The Bois’ book🫶😂

(and I’ll fix those typos, this was completely unedited, so😂)

tho I could share a snippet from Book 3 if you wanted👀

@freed_and_redeemed

*squeak of delight*

YAY!!! SECTION!!

Aw, so sad. 😭

Really good! Is this from book 3?!?!

I can’t wait to read it!!!!

caught two typos.

left to the mercy of his Nazi captors, whom had very little mercy

Should be “who”

and

he crouched slightly in front of the sixteen-year-old’s, meeting their t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk

I love them y’all😭🫶

So much had crumbled.

So many lives had been lost.

Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.

Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.

And Eze…

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@ellette-giselle haha I’m glad you like my commentary😂

@freed_and_redeemed

Sounds good! I love reading your comments!!

Great! I’m so glad it did.

@ellette-giselle You can tag me, sure! But I can’t make any promises on me reading all of the sections😅🫶

and that feeling definitely came across in the scene

@freed_and_redeemed

oof. Sorry.😬😁

Aw thank you. Philipp and his guys were pretty minor characters, but I always loved them. I read the true account of this exact same thing happening to a group of Roman soldiers and their lieutenant. I remember tearing up because of how sad it was that these young men had their lives cut short so brutally,…[Read more]