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Keilah H. replied to the topic Nonhuman Sentient Beings in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Nice to see you back! (Ha, I know I’ve already talked to you, but still. ;))
I’m not sure I’ll be able to commit to another full project right now, but I might pop in occasionally. So glad you were able to figure out some more stuff this time around, though!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle ok thanks!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I think you’re on Chapter 40.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I was just about to tell you I haven’t caught up in a while. Which chapter was the last one I commented on? I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sure thing!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle you’re welcome. Mind if I take the meme to post on my youtube channel on the 4th? They might find it funny.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle PEAK MEME LOLLLLLLL
I love that.
now, to prevent Soldier from deciding the cookies are for him and eating them all (and getting sick afterward)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
lol, yes!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Here’s the last story as it is now. I made a few changes during CEW, but I don’t think I made many
A breeze swept over the countryside, traveling over the hills and through the meadows, before stopping to tangle a young woman’s hair at the command of the man who sat in the grass beside her.
“Baron! Why?” She whined, trying to st…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sits back and smiles*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
not chapter, story *facepalm*
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
If you want, I would be happy to mark that chapter up for you and give a few spots where it felt emotionally lacking to me as the reader.
That’d be great! I already have made some changes to the first part of the chapter, so I’ll head over to The Baron Chronicles topic and repost the chapter.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I know!! That quote is just AMAZING!!! I would love to see more of him!
Yes, it was a little bit flat in places, and maybe it could use some reworking, but honestly I think 1st person would spoil it. I liked all the scenes you had and the way you laid it out, even if it could use a teeny bit of work. That’s what I’m trying to say.…[Read more]
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