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@linus-smallprint

I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.

mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.

Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…

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@hybridlore

Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.

Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,

“The great march of…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Good night!

I will patiently await Leander’s probably fuming response…

*Notices were already on page 3* Okay, I’ll touch on this soon. I’m drawing right now. XD

@the_lost-journal

The Protector-Gabriel

“I’m called the Protector.” His voice remained the same, and he made no movement to bow or show any recognition to Leander’s princely status.

I know, it’s short, but Gabriel doesn’t talk too much unless he’s in a banter mood, which does occasionally happen.

@the_lost-journal

The Protector-Gabriel

“If we stick as a group, it will be easier to keep others from falling to harm, but it also means we will cover less ground and it will be therefore longer before we can find enough of those purple balls to send everyone home.” The Protector ignored Leander’s last question. “Sticking as a group will keep…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I was watching a YouTube video, checked my notifs quick and there it was

@the_lost-journal

The Protector-Gabriel

The Protector looked at the vines, then at the strange cat-like person in front of him. “I don’t mind at all.” He spoke with an even tone, as if every word was measured. “But please be less reckless.” Even though he issued a request, his voice remained the same, showing no emotion. His voice was as blank…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

OOOOHHHHHH! Let the fun begin *evil villain laugh*

One sec, I’ll write and rp right now…

@anyone

The Protector-Gabriel

The Protector watched the events unfold in silence, sitting comfortably on a rock. Through the rune over his left eye, for a split second, he could see his little cottage home where the Fourth Protector waited through the purple ball. Once the boy went through, he saw his home no more.

The Protector sighed. This…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Are you saying I did a good job at describing him?!?!?! YAY!!!!

Yes, you did a good job. Gold star: ⭐

But that’s not to say the that his actions are safe….

Lol. Yet another thing that will make him and Gabriel clash. Gabriel also will plan out his moves, but he’s very careful. In his line of hobby, work, duty, wha…[Read more]

Other than that, this is a good section, and connects well with your previous ones.

@ellette-giselle

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heaven will be. These guys are scared and they need a reminder that they don’t need to worry and God will protect them, even if they die. They need to know that it will be worth it, and this can help them see tha…

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@the_lost-journal

Just for these reasons:

Exactly. I kinda saw some of those points coming when I read Leander’s description.

In Character Party, we had literal fights between characters. We resolved things a little, and no one died, but my poor Nahim had a concussion, and the other characters…oh Zaren ( @highscribeofaetherium )and Nahim had a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.

What does your signature mean, by the way?

@hybridlore

Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.

Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.

The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]

@keilah-h ^^

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle@keilah-h @theducktator

New chapters! I’m getting a little short on my supply so I’ll probably start posting singles instead of doubles every week soon. The past few weeks have been busy, but hopefully I’ll start writing again soon.

@ellette-giselle

I like how Konner and the others are afraid of the Empire. That seems realistic—I would be surprised if in a time like this, all the Christians were courageous enough to defy the government always. Julian’s speech is good. Very rousing. A few parts didn’t make sense.

“If we make decisions based on survival, and only on the abi…

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NEXT SECTION!!!

The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…

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