Loopy

@freed_and_redeemed ooh interesting! That sounds really fun.

Sadly I don’t know all of the LOTR characters well enough to add to this debate.

@linus-smallprint bruh I guess not

@ellette-giselle

on-slot

It’s actually spelled “onslaught.”

Also this new thing with Noah is very interesting! While I wouldn’t mind him dying if it furthered the plot, I honestly don’t think you should just kill him off for shock factor and “no one will ever know what happened because he’s…[Read more]

when I realize that only applies for this one specific type of plug outlet:

@theducktator here’s another one from him:

“Maybe plug outlets smile when they’re in the factory, but they frown when they realize their life purpose is to be shoved in the face.”

“In the veggietales universe, is being sent to the cutting board a criminal sentence?”

–my brother and his slightly disturbing thoughts

@linus-smallprint A little weird that the lyens would entrust the naming of their young to a species they think is inferior, but at least it makes sense now.

and yeah, judging from what I’ve seen on kentor names so far, Anamyth and Opitarus make sense too. I can’t tell on Iskyagus, but it seems like he should probably be a kentor as well, or some…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

It hasn’t been discouraging, as much as I was frustrated with myself because I felt like my writing ability was broken. I think Alcatraz has been messing with that.

Oh I am going to make him die just so that you never know what happened! That would drive reader’s insane!! That is such a good idea. I hadn’t thought of that!!!

I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

btw, I’ve got to know.

Did you think Noah was dead?

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness. Thank you so much!!

I am so, so happy! I felt like I was doing what you said, but each time you told me to do it again, and it was one of those things that was just out of reach.

I ended up deleting what I had written for this section after I read it to see where it was going, and then I just went for it. I…[Read more]

@koshka @loopylin @keilah-h

It’s only fair to wait and let Hunter react to the fact that he almost got slammed into tomorrow. Plus, the twins are being silent things to trip over……

If no one takes this by the time I’m board then I’ll just go.

@koshka

I’ll wait a minute to see if anyone else takes this. And if not I’ll RP

@linus-smallprint

Righto.I should post as soon as I can after you or Keilah responds, so if you don’t get tagged I guess take a look.

@keilah-h

Here is another LONG section!!!

Aaron straightened slowly at the sound of the whistle that called for the work day’s end. His shoulder’s ached horribly and his raw hands burned. The callouses cou…

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@koshka

Yay! She’s alive!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Okay. here we go again.

Lord of the Rings spoilers, depending on how far you are in the books.

Riker is Faramir. They both had cruel, unloving fathers. Riker was weaker then Faramir to start with, but by the end they both drew about even. They both resisted evil in the end, doing what was right rather then what would…[Read more]

I’m going to kill something! I wrote out the longest email ever, and KP ATE IT!!!!

@rae @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @anyone-else

I’m thinking about making something (mostly for fun) that compares characters from Freedom’s Fire to characters in other media (mostly movies tbh) and i was wondering what characters from, like, Marvel and LOTR y’all would compare each character to👀

(With a focus on…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I tried listening to it, and it was good, but not really my style. This is what I’ve had on repeat while cleaning up the currant draft of LTBL

It’s so good!

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTXfTX00oJg&list=OLAK5uy_nOjcTiFZU4zbnTj7BTU7YDWRN_tuKF9LE&index=1

@theducktator

The lighting in the room was terrible!! It came out worse then I thought it would!!!! *sob* Oh well. Her hair actually looks strawberry blond in the real picture. Not whatever Niki pink it looks like on here.

I’ll post mine tomorrow since I can finally get to the scanner.

@theducktator