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@rae @theshadow

Barnes

“Might as well be an exoskeletal crisis,” Barnes said. “Soul-searching is illegal in nineteen counties. You have always been you, Angelo, have a cup of tea.”

Hugo looked back and forth between Reid and Tenz. His eyes became the slightest bit shiny, expression hidden by his scarf. “I can’t go to anyone for help, Tenz. They…[Read more]

@keilah-h

They were characters from a very old WIP.

Glad you like it.

@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll

@ellette-giselle 17, almost 18. Remember how I was making a big deal about Sabina getting married that young because I could barely imagine getting married at my age? lol

Kenna and Zeke’s kids!!!

@keilah-h

Glad to hear that!

I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.

Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?

@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Okay, that’s two against me.

Glad you like the map!!

I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………

what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?

@hybridlore

Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.

I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.

Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!

also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.

@jonas

Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.

I guess give us a few in case he decides to make his way over here. Otherwise we might just have to abandon him.

@rae

No worries. It’s okay to call him Barron. I think i have his names down now.

Oops, I forgot to call Baron Brutus in the rp. Sorry.

@ellette-giselle

Totally gotcha. Sometimes it’s just good to get all your thoughts on a scene down, even if they don’t all end up in the final draft.

Sure. Hopefully you got what I meant, since this is kind of a controversial topic in Christian writing circles. In the end, it’s really up to the author who knows what’s best for their story h…[Read more]

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.

@hybridlore

Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.

First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.

You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.

So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
(No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)

Yeah. Funny you mention growing faster than a kitten when I have one trying to eat my shirt right now (She literally has the hem in her mouth XD)

“You’re elbows are sharper then normal elbows should be.”

Lol!

@grcr @raxforge (the one who needs to rp) @ellette-giselle

Baron (Brut…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

How did you know GRCR was RPing?

I used my superpower that allows me to see what KPers are doing.

jkjk

Actually, it was simple deduction. I knew from the community tab that she was still signed in to KP, and according to the Recent Topics tab, she wasn’t posting anything in other forums so I assumed she was simply typing a long…[Read more]

@rae

wow. How did you know GRCR was RPing?

@ellette-giselle

Awww! Really sweet scene. So… could I get some more backstory here? 😅 Aaron died because he was a Christian and didn’t give into the government, but the reason everyone else is still alive is because the gov doesn’t know they’re believers? And if Noah was tortured once for his faith, how did he escape?

I know this kind of thin…[Read more]