Loopy

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha.

Love the section! Mainly just a few typos. The orphans are so sweet, and Asher found a girl! 🥰 Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁

@theshadow

Another question I have for y’all that’s more personal is if you’ve ever gone through a stage in your faith journey where you start questioning/doubting what you’ve been taught. Feel free to not answer this question though.

When I was about fourteen, (2ish years ago), out of nowhere —or what it seemed—I started having doubts about every…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.

I say keep it

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@koshka

How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?

I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?

lolol.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”

“Oh…

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@hybridlore

Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.

Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.

@ellette-giselle

True.

Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.

@princesachronicle22
You’re in luck; I, a bystander, just finished reading through this entire roleplay for no reason. Goodness, this one’s pretty funny.

The ducks took one look at each other and went to opposite sides of the pavilion

I just about died when I read this.

I think basically everyone (at least almost everyone) found out about the…[Read more]

@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

@theshadow @keilah-h @theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin

that would be cool! I’ve been so dead to KP like for half a year, I’ve been so busy 😂😭. And I’m kinda really lost as to whats happened in this RP, would any of y’all mind recapping me?

@theshadow UH, YEAH.

lol

I’ll get around to it tomorrow

@keilah-h @rae @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Hey all, do you still want to do this? If not, that’s completely fine.

@whalekeeper

What’s this topic for?

@the_lost-journal

Oh boy. Ngl, this does not sound like me lol…

@thearcaneaxiom

Well if you ask me it’s not so much that hell is a punishment for sin as much as the state you choose to exist in.

Well, people who choose to live apart from God on earth are kind of living a personal hell, right?

Well if you ask me it’s not so much that hell is a punishment for sin as much as the state you choose to exist in. If…

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@hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium

Ok, thanks.

Shattered… fragments.

Thoughts… broken.

What? Why?

Memories whirl.

Voices, who?

Flashes, noise, tears.

Why?

Louder, louder! So many, too many. Never… end.

Could it… end?

Fragments. Pieces. Shattered. Tiny, big, scathing.

Guilt. Much guilt.

Never end. Only noise.

Too many. Sleep.…

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