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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
wow! haven’t heard from you in a little while! I was wondering if you were still reading!
I think I plan to keep it. It honestly is a very special thing and a special part of the story, and I feel like it really shows their faith as whole as embodying some of the key messages of the book. I have actually ended each of the books in this…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
no offense to them of course.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
me hearing a term in a youtube video and then looking it up:
the search: what the heck does blorbo mean
google: “Blorbo” is internet slang that refers to a beloved fictional character from a TV show or other media, essentially meaning a character you have a strong personal attachment to and consider your “favorite” within that universe; it’s…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle wow! I’m kinda scared for them. I hope at least someone will make it out alive.
Also, I like the hymn and suggest you keep it in. Shortening it if you have to is okay, though.
My idea? You can put the whole hymn in the back of the book, and if there’s a tune you had in mind while writing it, add that too, so people can play…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper oh that’s too funny! lol
My friend said she put me in a book once. I think I was some kind of elf character–I wanna say my character equivalent’s name was Cassiopeia. She had a really tall brother, whose name was Corvus.
Sadly I haven’t gotten to talk to this friend lately and I think she put that story off to the side anyway.
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I just realized I can’t actually flip my hair because I have a bob cut. 😐
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Enid replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
I second what everyone else is saying :]
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Enid replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I liked it—although it has been fuel for my dislike of the word soup.
What?? You don’t like the word soup?? I love love love the word soup, you must be absolutely out of your mind, girl. 😝 You like the food though, right?
I read Narnia, but other then that I read mostly fiction set in our world or a fantasy world that was…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium yeah, that’s a good outlook on it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@rae I’m not familiar with this story about Baron, but I love it already!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper whoa nice pictures of the art gallery! Where was that, exactly?
also cute doggie lol, what’s his name?
@rae I don’t know what you meant by saying your drawings are bad back when you refused to post them. They’re better than mine. Sure, I can get the overall shapes of characters down and stuff, but I can’t shade to save my…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I read Narnia, but other then that I read mostly fiction set in our world or a fantasy world that was basically earth alternate reality with no weird creatures just a bunch of artistic liberty.
The only other Kate DiCamillo book I know for sure I’ve read is Because of Winn-Dixie.
Oh wait, I read that one. I didn’t like i…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
that doesn’t matter. We all have a learning curve. I hate some of the drawings I have on here, but that doesn’t matter. Plus, you can get helpful feedback and/or encouragement!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
You can’t leave me hanging there!! 😖 Although, I’m wondering if I want to know what happens next.
No real changes to the scene that I could think of. The one hymn is pretty long, but if you want to include it all, that’s fine.
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
SERIOUSLY?!
Lol, I guess I have to write now…. I’ll be back when i have something
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr
thx
WHY HAVE YOU NOT BEEN POSTING YOUR ART!!!???
Because I’m gonna hate these drawings, and then they’ll be forever on here. Besides, they’re far from perfect.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
12/31/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.
Beric rolled over and yawned.
At the other side of the room, David was a…
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