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@theducktator

I’m scared for calculus.

lol yeah I’m not ready for that either. Still just barely mastering algebra.

@ellette-giselle yeah they’re all great!

@ellette-giselle

 I wonder if Helene, Erich, and Eden got out. I pray they did.

Me too, would be really sad if they didn’t.

Ernst got in an argument with a squirrel who kept throwing nuts at him. Ernst shot it. We’ll have a good meal with it tonight.

lol!

For some reason I’m really liking the living-in-the-caves-and-foraging section. I feel ba…[Read more]

@theducktator whoa I love those character boards!

@the_lost-journal oooh he’s cool!!

@keilah-h

Not sure, but I’m glad you do!! I love all the names together.

@theducktator

Yessss!!!! I am!!!!

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!

gonna go read your Dawn Will Come chapter soon. btw did I ever tell you I really like the name of the book?

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!

@ellette-giselle That’s awesome!!! I’m happy for ya.

@theducktator

Oooo! I like him!!!

@linus-smallprint

haha! It would be a British mystery. I may have to write that……….

Plot Armour!

Oh. You just wait.

He does not get to keep that for long.

I killed Aelic.

Sometimes, it’s nice to keep things simple. Just a few words and normalish clothing.

Honestly though, I love that image.

I’ll want a wedding dress, (…[Read more]

@theducktator

Aha!!! I had the tune playing my head but I couldn’t remember the name. Thank you!

@ellette-giselle

That’s good that they’ll be more distinguishable— but I hope that doesn’t mean they’ll drift apart.

Yeah xD It would be interesting. It was a sweet scene though.

@hybridlore

Cool! I feel like this is really where Leon and Julian sort of start to drift apart in personality. They’re really starting to experience different things from one another, and it’s changing them.

I love the idea of Roland and Liesl getting married in their work clothes with their scarves and hats because it’s so cold and they’re…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I liked the transition right at the scene break before Liesl and Roland got married. And how you showed Leon’s state of mind after the fever and how Julian didn’t understand it.

@hybridlore

lolol.

Oh I wasn’t meaning suggestions as much as thoughts about the story.

@ellette-giselle

No, I was just on my phone already and I saw the notification pop up.

Not really… no suggestions really stood out. 🤷‍♀️

@hybridlore

Wow, that was fast.

what were you doing? just sitting there waiting? 😂

That was a pretty long section and covered a good deal of stuff…. do you have any thoughts on particular sections of the section?

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Good section. I’m so glad Leon didn’t die.