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@lydibug

Lol I just realized that Chloe was the one who threw the shoe during the fight XD   I think that was my favorite part of that whole scene.

Also, btw, the girls are really short. Like hobbit sized (3 feet).

What does Chloe look like?

Eddie 

Ed’s eyes sparkled. “Dress shopping? Everyone??”

She turned halfway around, tail whippin…[Read more]

There! Finally! It posted!

Part 3:

However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

Ughhh the part 2 won’t post

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

However, I think the reveal wou…[Read more]

@rae

Um this post isn’t working so I’m going to send it in two parts to see if that helps.

Part 1:

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it…[Read more]

@rea

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it that way. There’s obviously nothing wrong with using italics. It kinda looks cooler, actually.…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Finally finished reading! I’m loving the characters. That last one with the toad was adorable.

That’s annoying

Oh wait nvm

@euodia-vision Are you trying to send a picture?

@whalekeeper

Hugo!! Yay!

He wasn’t the character I was talking about but I’m really excited anyway XD

I kinda wanna add Dante and Rina too… but then I’d have a total of seven characters running around :/

@lydibug That would be great!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thanks!!

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah Hobie’s my favorite so he probably unintentionally influenced the drawing a bit. I love your Bucky drawing! White on black paper always looks so cool.

@euodia-vision

You could stick Felicity (and the twins too!) in with Riya. I think her original roommates have kind’ve disappeared…

And Lois could room with Tirion and @keilah-h ‘s Crosshair and Tech!

Ok, thanks! That’s really helpful.

@fernweh_grace

That sounds like so much fun. I love thunderstorms and candles. I’d love to read what you wrote. Did you post it already somewhere else?

@euodia-vision

Thanks! 😊

Oh wait here I changed the colors slightly (you probably can’t even tell lol)

@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @anyone (y’all can ignore these tags if you want)

This is a full Rina drawing I’ve been working on for a while.