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@rae
Just to clarify, I think that Chase having that flaw makes him a good and realistic character. I’m not critiquing his flaw, I’m critiquing that it’s being shown as a virtue.

@savannah_grace2009 Yayy :]

Why do I always either not respond to these things, or respond with 3+ giant paragraphs?? There’s pretty much no in between XD

@theducktator 8 or 9

@rae

Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

I found a dumb song that made me giggle called I Am Steve by Hey Steve

Been listening to it on repeat XD

@ellette-giselle

hmm I was taking a break, but I have nothing to do for the next three hours so you can give me a description if you want

I think there’s a bit of over explaining going on with the world building (telling not showing), though it’s not as much as I typically see in early drafts.

@linus-smallprint

I’m on chapter three and really enjoying the world building and the characters so far. Congrats on holding my short attention span with your story for this long 😅

I plan on reading the rest tonight :]

“Do you speak Taco Bell?” -a random guy at work

@whalekeeper Aww your chibi style is adorable <3

umm does the character have to be human?

@whalekeeper Ok I’m still doing my break but I also want to write the roof scene so here

Lois

“Felicity… would you like to go somewhere after this and hang out together? Marcel offered to fly us to the roof.”

Felicity looked up from her drawing and smiled.“The roof? Yeah sure!”

Lois noted her lack of hesitation.

“Just us two,” he added.

“Sou…[Read more]

I was going to do this challenge, but I slept in and then had to run some errands instead. 😞

I think I’m going to try for two hours starting now. I know that isn’t much, but it’s better than the nothing I’ve been doing for years lol

@rae

Nice! You’re getting good at realism

@y’all

I think I’m going to take a break from this rp. Not sure for how long. Maybe three weeks?

You know I’ll be back. I’m addicted XD

And I’ll probably wait until after I do the scene with Felicity and Lois on the roof before I actually leave.

@whalekeeper Ok, I understood it much better than I thought I did. The only part that I didn’t already get was if Seb had knocked them unconscious or just made their brains all fuzzy.
Thanks for explaining! I think the lovedream magic system is really interesting and I get excited when you talk about it.

@highscribeofaetherium Oh I haven’t heard that one p. I’ll have to listen to it later.
Umm I really like Hey, Runner!, Envy Green, and Blue Eyed Girl

@whalekeeper Nice pfp :]

Teleportation was the only part of Seb’s powers I felt like I understood, lol. What did he just do to Caly’s characters? I’m not sure I completely followed.

Lois 

He hesitated, fiddling with a pencil in one hand.

“…Sure,” he said finally.

“Yeah?”

“Yeah. After art class is done?”

“Sounds good.”

“Thanks, Marce…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium Yes! I love their music! Do you have a favorite song?

@whalekeeper
Lois

The slightest bit of color grew in Lois’ pale cheeks. He adjusted his glasses, resisting the urge to look at Felicity again. He blinked a few times at Marcel.

“I, uh,” He cleared his throat.“I thought you hated playing cupid.”

@whalekeeper *now somewhat intimidated* ok

@highscribeofaetherium thanks!