@loopylin
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
thanks for the feedback!
If you have only one eye, you have no depth perception. You have to bob your head like a pigeon to get the full picture.
Yes I’ve thought about this, and I guess I’ve just decided that I don’t care? Though he’s from a “sci-fi” comic book technically, I’ve kinda thrown science out the window and instead go with…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@people
Dante
Last night, somewhere in the city…
Dante was cornered. He had nowhere else to run. He stood on the flat rooftop of an apartment building, clutching a short metal pipe in his right hand. The cool night breeze ruffled his dark hair.
Facing him crouched a large lizard-like creature, with a snout stuck in a permanent sneer and y…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago

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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ok I’m adding Dante!
I’ve resisted adding Dante to the rp for over a month. I think this is a new record for me. XD
Here’s some pictures:

He is another alien, is about 5 feet tall, about 17 in human years, and has fire proof skin.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper I doodled a somewhat alright looking Marcel reading a comic book

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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
Those look awesome! I love the colors on the first one.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@lydibug I’m glad you like them! 😊
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@euodia-vision ok! I’ll wait about another day for them to respond
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It looks like a unicorn tail to me, but probably not to other people. Also, the green is on their backs, necks, backs of their arms and hands, and on their noses.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
And here’s what the tail looks like

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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey you’re back!
Also, I can’t banish the image of little green martian girls with brown hair and sparkly unicorn tails from my mind. It hurts. Help.
Lol yeah idk why I keep giving terrible descriptions of my characters when I can just

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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@calyhuge @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76
Would one of you guys like to go in the snack thieves group, or would you like me to?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh I love lynxes! She sounds pretty.
Eddie
“No…”
The three girls had now turned together and were now following the crowd of students towards the main doors of the school. Eddie had to speak louder to be heard over the chattering around them, which wasn’t a problem for her.
“But I’d love to learn electric guitar. Or drums maybe.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
*materializes out of nowhere*
Ik this is a bit off-topic from what you guys are talking about but seriously, I just watched Guardians of the Galaxy Volume III – and it is the best and no one can take Rocket away from me, he is KING
YES. That movie was the BEST. I think a lot of my space comic is inspired by it. And I love Rocket so m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lol I just realized that Chloe was the one who threw the shoe during the fight XD I think that was my favorite part of that whole scene.
Also, btw, the girls are really short. Like hobbit sized (3 feet).
What does Chloe look like?
Eddie
Ed’s eyes sparkled. “Dress shopping? Everyone??”
She turned halfway around, tail whippin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 9 months ago
There! Finally! It posted!
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 9 months ago
Part 3:
However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 9 months ago
Part 2:
Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?
This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 9 months ago
Ughhh the part 2 won’t post
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