Loopy

@fernweh_grace

Finally finished reading! I’m loving the characters. That last one with the toad was adorable.

That’s annoying

Oh wait nvm

@euodia-vision Are you trying to send a picture?

@whalekeeper

Hugo!! Yay!

He wasn’t the character I was talking about but I’m really excited anyway XD

I kinda wanna add Dante and Rina too… but then I’d have a total of seven characters running around :/

@lydibug That would be great!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thanks!!

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah Hobie’s my favorite so he probably unintentionally influenced the drawing a bit. I love your Bucky drawing! White on black paper always looks so cool.

@euodia-vision

You could stick Felicity (and the twins too!) in with Riya. I think her original roommates have kind’ve disappeared…

And Lois could room with Tirion and @keilah-h ‘s Crosshair and Tech!

Ok, thanks! That’s really helpful.

@fernweh_grace

That sounds like so much fun. I love thunderstorms and candles. I’d love to read what you wrote. Did you post it already somewhere else?

@euodia-vision

Thanks! 😊

Oh wait here I changed the colors slightly (you probably can’t even tell lol)

@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @anyone (y’all can ignore these tags if you want)

This is a full Rina drawing I’ve been working on for a while.

@whalekeeper

Ok, thanks! I can stick Felicity in the same room as the twins and some other girls and then I guess Lois can go… somewhere… eh, I’ll figure it out.

I know it’s a long shot, but Marcel might ask one of the twins to the dance. If they get to know each other. He loves origami 😊

That would be so awesome! Origami is Ellie’s favorite…[Read more]

Also, @whalekeeper , I know I’ve asked this a few times already, sorry, but how can I figure out who my character’s roommates are?

@peeps

Ok, here’s my lil alien dudes

Eddie: female, about 14 in human years ish, 3’ tall, green eyes, long brown hair in a French braid, tan skin with some green coloring, long unicorn-like tail, wears a white tank top and dark pants

Ellie: Eddie’s identical twin sister, chin length brown hair, wears a sky blue hoodie

Eddie

Eddie was dying…[Read more]

@grcr

Ooo I love this one and the other character ones you’ve posted! Your story seems really cool.

I should start making mood boards again…

@freedomwriter76

NO! *grabs Riker and Leon* don’t take ma bois from me!!!! I shall give them blankets and coco myself, thank you very much! XD

lol you better 😆

this new 😀 emoji is creeping me out just a lil bit…XD

hehe yeah sometimes my friends use that emoji when they’re trying to be threatening

@freedomwriter76

Those all look so cool!

why are all my charries so saddddd 😭

Well, I don’t know. Do I need to steal them from you so they can have a break and give them each a blanket and cup of hot coco? XD

@rae

Also what kind of things do you most want criticism on? Grammar? Style? Story structure?

I can also just read it and tell you the things I like about it. : )

@rae

Hello!

I’m sorry I didn’t see you tagging me for a while. I finally started reading your story and I’m enjoying it so far, but I’m only halfway through chapter two. I have a really hard time reading the italics and long paragraphs, but I’m not giving up! I’ll give you a longer response later when I finish it.

Thanks for tagging me. Sorry I…[Read more]